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The Silenced
🕑 Added 2024-07-19 22:00:00 +0000 UTCThe post was supposed to go live yesterday at the usual schedule, but editing took forever (Ｔ▽Ｔ) I'm writing this at 3 am hahaha, and I’m not sure if I can keep my thoughts straight while doing this. Apologies if my sentences seem a bit off structurally.
You are welcome to share my works freely without my permission or credits (it's preferable if you do so, but you aren't required to), EXCEPT the commissions.
あなたの許可やクレジットなしで私の作品を自由に共有していただいて構いません（できればそうしていただけると嬉しいですが、必須ではありません）、ただし、委託作品は除きます。
您可以在不需要我的许可或署名的情况下自由分享我的作品（虽然最好这样做，但并不是必须的），但委托作品除外。
The Short Story
Here’s the original script I had from years ago (from the time I created Caroline High). I’ve made some edits here and there since then. It’s not 100% identical to the Visual Novel version.
Disclaimers regarding the Short Story:
- I did all the translations with my little-to-non-existent Chinese and Japanese languange skills, relying heavily on Google Translate and ChatGPT. Personally, I’d prefer a human prowess, but in this case: my skills are bye-bye, I can’t afford to hire one (not yet, anyway!), and I doubt any professional translator service would take on a... rather questionable fiction work ( ༎ຶ⌑༎ຶ )
- I’m pretty sure the Japanese version suffers because I did the translation veeery late at night with my brainpower running on empty (Ｔ▽Ｔ)
- If you’re a native speaker and want to help with the translation (though I’m sorry I can’t offer any monetary compensation at the moment Ｔ▽Ｔ), please let me know!
- As is often the case with translations, some nuances or contexts might get lost. If you have any suggestions for improving certain terms, scenes, dialogues, or anything else, please drop a comment below or send me a message! I’d like to learn as much as I can.
The Illustrations
For those who can't download the VN or for those who want the fullsize images, these are the compilled images:
The Visual Novel
Please be mindful that this is still experimental ╥﹏╥ I'm using Tyranobuilds and I still haven't change some of their templates... yet.
Here's my to-do list if I decide to continue with the story:
- Create a custom and polished UI
- Use high-quality and professional sound/BGM
- Experiment with other engines like RenPy
- Add more languages (Besides Chinese and Japanese, do you have any recommendations?)
- COMPRESS THE FILES!!! I should have done this before uploading, but I realized that Tyranobuild didn't automatically update variables with newer files (Ｔ▽Ｔ). So, I had to update everything manually... And my lazy ass just couldn't... Hahaha... Sorry if the file size is huge for just a few minutes of content... I'll definitely do better next time...
- Add the next chapter
- Improve the narrative/literature (grammar, nuances, etc.)
- Enhance the background. Right now, it looks like raw 3D from SketchUp T_T
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Disclaimers regarding the VN:
- I am using free-to-use resources, the credits are listed here: Falling Body, Camera Shutters, Gunshot, Boiling Soup, Ambient Road Side, Zipper Closing, Playfair Font. In addition to the items listed, all other assets (such as 3D backgrounds, textures, and images) are my property, whether they were obtained through purchase or created by me.
- Many of the artworks were completed at the last minute and some were over an extended period of time T_T I apologize again for the lower quality of some pieces, especially the body bag section.
All in all
Have fun!
Give me your thoughts, opinion, or anything (ㆆ ᴗ ㆆ)
It’s 4 am and as I wrap up this post, I’m feeling like I’m flying~ ⁽⁽ଘ( ˊωˋ )ଓ⁾⁾ Getting high is pretty much how I feel right now~~
I’m about to hit the sack so I can catch up on my commissions tomorrow hehehe... See you on Monday!
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Disclaimer | 免責事項 | 免责声明
- This work is purely a work of fiction. As the artist and writer, I do not condone or promote such behavior in real life. | この作品は完全なフィクションです。私はアーティストおよび作家として、現実の世界でこのような行動を容認したり、推奨したりするものではありません。|
本作品纯属虚构。作为艺术家和作者，我并不支持或提倡在现实生活中进行此类行为。
- All translations are generated by machine and may not accurately reflect the original content. | 翻訳はすべて機械翻訳によるもので、必ずしも元の内容を正確に反映しているとは限りません。| 所有翻译均为机器生成，可能无法准确反映原始内容。
- You are welcome to repost this content. While credit is not required, it is greatly appreciated. If you choose to credit or inform me, it would mean a lot. | このコンテンツは自由に転載していただいて構いません。クレジットは不要ですが、いただけると大変ありがたいです。クレジットしていただいたり、ご一報いただければ幸いです。| 您可以自由转载此内容。不要求标明出处，但如能给予出处或告知我，将不胜感激。
Comments
ruby
非常感谢你的信任和支持！不过目前我的技能还不够成熟，还无法通过支付宝来接受约稿。感谢你的理解！
ruby
Thank you for always commenting on my post! >< please take care of yourself also <3
ruby
Oh, no no! I just changed them because I've been using the same picture for years ( > 〰 < )
yifan56
前问可不可以通过支付宝来约稿吗
妍妍
I noticed you changed the fanbox avatar and background image. Is this a preview of some mysterious work? (^^)/
妍妍
This is a new form of work ah, ha ha ha, interesting attempt, my mother tongue is Chinese, in my opinion, the Chinese translation version is enough for native speakers to understand the content, thank you for providing the Chinese version. Finally, please take care of yourself (^0^)/
