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Chapter 264 - The House of Mirrors

🕑 Added 2024-07-19 03:33:23 +0000 UTC

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Fastus

I'm trying to convince myself that Rain is charming them both to make them trust him. Somethimg really subtle that requires him to share some sad story about his past right after he met them. Everything would feel too strange otherwise. I'm finding it harder and harder to keep reading after they met him, but I keep hoping..

Dylan Alexander

Of course he fits in well, he was literally written to fit in well.

Ham I Am Sandwitch

I like Rain. Although his introduction feels a little ham-fisted, its certainly coming at the best possible time it could. Its clear he was introduced because of the power gap between the mainland and the archipelago, and also to add variety to the party, and he fits in well with the two of them. His demeanor is also very well written and matches with his backstory. He wanted to escape from his family, and in doing so he wanted to change himself to match his new position, but he's still learning how he wants to change himself. This was made clear by his monologuing on the boat. His use of his powers to try to fit in better shows that his attitude isnt perfect and he made mistakes in crafting his story. His trust in Flynn shows his desire/need for someone he can trust after a lifetime of deceit. His aloof and charming nature shows him wanting to be genuinely liked by people, not just because of the predetermined notions of his princely status. He's a good character, people are just upset because of the timing of his introduction, even though it honestly couldn't have been a better time to do so as he literally saved Kai's life when Kai lost a fight to a strong opponent.

Kyfe

Flynn usually has better social sense. He should have kept quiet a bit longer, lol.


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