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Chapter 287 - Thickening Mist

🕑 Added 2024-10-04 13:45:37 +0000 UTC

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Ananiash

Glad I'm not the only one feeling this way, this arc is pretty bad imo. Kai feels like a secondary character too

Alison (aka Brianna Stormcloud)

Thank you ;)

A B

Edit suggestion: Raih might --> Rain might

Mina She

That’s interesting, people we are different. I like the training , skill levels going up that kind of thing the most . Having other things going on is always nice too and with the system danger is always rewarded,so I am sure by the end of this they will be a lot of improvement.

Maree

I had exactly the opposite reaction :) I had enough of the training arcs for now and am enjoying this more unpredictable quest. Kai getting involved in his sister's problems makes perfect sense to me and I like to spend more time with the other characters and see their interactions. Besides, he's arogant, so It's fun seeing him shown up a little.

Mina She

I get you. Kai has always been inexperienced and sheltered, and the hidden realm didn’t help. Think that’s part of what is causing the passivity, he is not in his element. The best parts of this arc have been the fights, getting to see all the new tricks he can do. Kind of wish we had stayed in the archipelago a little longer. Maybe he went back to the estate and we got to understand more about his skills and the improvements. Even though we had a time skip, a slower pace could have been nice. Get reacquainted with where he is now, even getting to the mainland, and setting up. Now it just feels like he is getting involved in things that have absolutely nothing to do with him . The best parts of the story are when we are focusing on Kai and his growth. Hopefully it will all make sense soon.

George R

Thanks for the chapter

John

for all that he was supposed to have gained a lot from the pocket dimension, it feels like everyone else around him grew more than he did.

Lenora

I’m kind of bummed at this arc. I haven’t been enjoying the story since he returned to his world. Which sucks because I adore the rest of the series. I think it’s that Kai should feel like he’s driving more of the story. But despite having to fend for himself and becoming much stronger, he’s instead become more passive and the other characters are driving everything. The balance just feels very…off.

zeke hustwit

This sentence is a bit off. “He slipped into proper clothes, pressing hip lips when the icy shirt touched his skin”

Ottstop

TYFTC! Raih —> Rain might be sheltered and inexperienced, but he was most definitely not defenseless. 

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! So indeed the receptionist is suspicious and Rain the expert will go take a look! It's great to get another POV from him! He is the one character who actually with good reason thinks himself stronger and more prepared than Kai but as a Siren the first time on Land also has some very clear weaknesses which make him kind of very approachable as a character I feel!

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

HeartHawk

Am I the only one who got stunlocked by the neologism "manomission?" I had tried to reconcile a spelling error for "manumission" before finally realizing it likely meant emitting mana...

Gabriel Medeiros

Don't think manumission is the word to use there. That word is always in the context of people, not things.

Cypress Dougherty

Thanks for the chapter! I love seeing Rain try to figure out land customs 😆

Connor Hinrichs

Go Rain! So glad the manipulation specialist picked up on how odd everyone is after going to the Hall


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