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Chapter 292 - Across the Mirror

🕑 Added 2024-10-22 00:21:04 +0000 UTC

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Amari Charles

Glad you asked. Honestly I’m my mind I was imaging that they were almost adults. It’s been a while since read this but man they really are doing insane things for a bunch of kids

piranha

How does astral pathway work?

Alison (aka Brianna Stormcloud)

Great chapter, thank you

Conrad Manaugh

Hobbes

kiewitz

Tbh even if it isn't a requirement Kai is playing the long game, and maxing out a red skill shouldn't be too big of an issue for him

Andrea Pozzi

He's 14 and about 8 months

Mina She

I think so too though next chapter will probably be about what has been discovered. In their conversation Kai and Valela were very vague about what’s going on and we didn’t learn anything new.

David

I think the color coded rank system and how the way they get specific points toward the upgrade of their class or profession based on the skills they upgrade is one of the biggest draws for me. Most books in this genre have the mechanics or requirements so undefined or flimsy that I skim over them. With this system i can visualize the progress, it feels earned, and I look forward to it a lot. It's very disappointing to me when there are zero status updates for 30 chapters

David

I agree, there needs to be another chapter for the immediate aftermath of the attack before this, but this us a good chapter by itself

Gopard

Thank you for the chapter! Love the Valela-Kai chemistry and interactions but I keep my opinion about the timeskip... Either you need to do this pay off differently or just rewrite the whole conflict in Limgrell to be much much shorter so the readers aren't expecting a huge pay off for what is I think way over 10 chapters now right? And honestly I feel like for the pace of the story it would have been much much better to not have this cult stuff forced on Kai RN! But just after the whole boat attack thing have him find Kea and go to the magic school academy thing for a new extended training arc with some teenage romance between Valela and Kai lol and some very dearly needed Social training for Kai. The most important thing though would have been: You foreshadowed the school arc so many times and instead we get a nonsensical cult conflict, not only are the adversaries again impossibly strong they are ALSO comically Evil... This kind of theme just feels a bit shoehorned how everytime Kai is done with one thing the next just about impossible to overcome Group will jump out do something super evil and also piss in his wind only for right then the perfect necessary just strong/influential enough ally to pop up who helps Kai the hero to narrowly defeat the impossible adversary... Kai is supposed to be someone who DOES NOT LIKE AND SEEK OUT CONFLICT WITH OTHER SENTIENT PEOPLE! Yet the majority of this book is again him doing the complete opposite... It reads nicely bc the story before as well as the world and characters are amazing, but I fear if this continues it runs the risk in turning into a clishee escalating power loop of "Kai mushes bad guy-> gets stronger -> finds next bad guy mushes him-> gets stronger-> next evil cult pops up Kai spots and fights and defeats them-> gets stronger.... This kind of story telling is so abundant in RoyalRoad and over the way everything from the Ship on was written it has more and more given me those vibes though I would love to be pleasently surprised after this Arc. And that is the last issue... I do not believe Caeden or Niel are Dead though by all rights they NEED to be, I hate for them to die, but if they survive it would remove the last vestiges of "consequences" for "Everyone close to Kai", it does NOT get more dead than "kidnapped by an ancient evil cult for MONTHS". Maybe Niel's rescue could be somehow explained away, though I would guess his adventuring days would be over after the treatment he no doubt has suffered over this month. And the last huge problem with the time skip is as follows: It SEEMS like you as the author don't see any way to have Kai and company do anything productive without it being a plothole or DeusExMachina... Niel was literally taken from NEXT TO KAI... They SHOULD NOT HAVE SURVIVED ANOTHER MONTH AS IT WAS, I find the notion that NOBODY of the group would have seperated from the others at least once over a month impossible thus they should have been taken end of story sadly... You can't create an impossible situation and then just time skip it away without it feeling like "oh the author realized the MC can't actually do what they planned for him to manage lets explain it with time skip". Now I want to say this: While this may seem like a rant and I thought this myself at first as well it actually isn't... Whereas my feelings on wether the whole cult conflict belongs at this point in the story are purely that feelings and may not be so thats for you as the author and every reader for themselves to decide. The whole Cult and investigation conflict was overall not well written, you wrote yourself into a corner making the cult way to strong and maybe you as the author could have somehow found a good interesting way out of it by having Rain use some super rear treasure or somesuch the timeskip just kills the whole Arc as basically saying "Well it doesn't matter its Kai if it seems actually impossible we'll just have time skip and thats it"... This happened with Sanctuary as well BTW though at least there it was the FIRST major time and made narratively sense... Here you wrote a part of "Mc meets allies and investigates evil cult together, they fail to make progress try something more active and have a big failiure" Time-skip into "Mc and allies continue to investigate and fight big bad evil Cult" basically you had them run around for several chapters showing the non-substancial parts of the "investigation" where they learned nothing much and then time skipped through the very interesting parts where they suddenly found huge leads and now return to them continuing with almost exactly the same general things and situation as before the timeskip only the most interesting stuff is taken care off. Because no its not really that interesting to see a bunch of overpowered combatmaniac MCs to fight of baddies and free friendlies the investigation was way way more interesting as suddenly Kai and Oraine couldn't just solve everything by "being stupidly good at combat you know" not even to mention that it was the HARD part in this Quest to save Niel and skipping those is never good for an Arc... My personal opinion on the last 2 chapters (I absolutely loved the one where Rain figured the girl out, literally gave us hope something may move forward and right after you timeskip sorry just can't get over that annoyance lol)/last Arc. PS: I really really do not want to discourage you in any way to stop writing this amazing piece of fiction though (otherwise I would if anything be doing that on RR don't have that kind of money to burn xD. Thank you for providing us with Elydes in the first Place!)

Mina She

Oh my Gosh, yes so it seems lol 🤣🤣🤣🤣

Dud

Sunny? Reading too much shadow slave😂

Shawn

Can you add Kai's age to the status it's so hard to remember?

Gabriel Medeiros

Still not clear if it's a requirement or just a bonus. It's possible having those skills at 100 increases the chance of a better upgrade for example. A bit like getting your first class with a worse or better skill set.

Mina She

Since they are dealing with a cult , is there a possibility of meeting another god? That would be so funny, imagine Kai meeting his mentors again and now having blessings from 4 gods.

Mina She

Yah me too and I am excited for the class upgrade. Having a red class has slowed down his growth.

Kris Piskorski

Nice to see some of valela back, although I'm still unsure about the timeskip

Austin

Chapter 259: Being two grades higher also eased the effort of raising his profession skills. Once they all reached level 100, there would be nothing stopping him from advancing Favored Son of the Isles. He’d finally be able to face threats on an even playing field—he was sick and tired of being the underdog.

zdm

Tyftc! The mysterious nature of the Guide, and the evolving skills that come with it, the color coded ranking system... these are all things I love about this story. I know Kai's growth has slowed, and I think systems often fade to the background in times of heavy plot, but I'm glad to see a character sheet again.

Gabriel Medeiros

Just re-read 219. I may have missed it, but I didn't see any text suggesting he needs his class skills at 100 to evolve. What 219 said was that in order to evolve class skills you need to evolve the class first

Austin

Chapter 219

Gabriel Medeiros

which chapter said that?

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter and looking forward to their next meeting in person.

Austin

It's a requirement. It's said in a chapter that a profession can't upgrade until all the profession skills hit 100.

Gabriel Medeiros

Not sure if that's a requirement or just a bonus upon upgrade. Either way I'm sure Drew is saving the upgrade for a dramatic moment in the story. Maybe a needed power boost at a key moment?

Mina She

He can’t he has to max out all the class skills plus the class level. His almost there though , just astral pathway left at 96

Gabriel Medeiros

Interesting that Kai is not upgrading his class in the face of incredible odds. I would imagine he would scrape for every advantage.

David

Yes! Stats! So close to evolving! Hopefully he can raise astral pathway 4 more points and upgrade his profession to orange before the confrontation

yosef melul

Big fan of Valela - Kai interactions


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