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Chapter 295 - Ambush

🕑 Added 2024-11-04 16:21:07 +0000 UTC

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David

I think he could make the arc good with more team build up before te time skip and actual stat details and updates throughout like previous arcs. Once the author got started publishing his first books it not only messed up his schedule, but he's lost most of his interest in character abilities. I don't really know what all his profession skills or some of his general skills do, and I've been looking for that since Kai left the sanctuary. It's like it's thrown a couple times in the arc because the author feels like he has to but i think it's a key factor in the story.

Gabriel Medeiros

I think the arc has a lot of potential. And we haven't seen the conclusion yet, which will probably be epic. That being said I do think there are some issues with the arc as well. In my opinion the biggest issue is that we don't know how the team figured out anything in this arc. So much is hidden by the time skip, and the pre-skip doesn't point to anything solid either that would lead the team to where it's at right now.

Gio

The current arc is boring imo :-/ Just some feedback, do with it what you will.

Sean T

The story has been feeling one dimensional to me personally. Always getting caught off guard, multiple characters including MC has the same rash personality and gets surprised left and right and even monologues are similar where they all think they are acting for other people's best interest therefore doing something dangerous or breaking a promise. Just some feedback. It's like a disease spreading to different characters each chapter, so I ask myself who's the dumb dumb this chapter.

Elsie Nnaji

Can anyone tell me the release day for chapter

Rylie Harris

tftc

Froyo Baggins

*in formation

Wiggles1

Also, "Perhaps it wasn't a case that they ran into them at sea on the Intrepid" This one should also be "wasn't by chance/just chance" or "wasn't a coincidence"

Wiggles1

Should be "wasn't by chance/just chance" or "wasn't a coincidence"

Mina She

I get you if it was Kai , Rain , Hobbes and maybe Flynn only. They can take care of themselves. If the enemies are mostly yellow then there is no way Kea and her team can fight them and they will end up being a liability to the stronger members. Then there is the over confidence from Kea and Caeli when they are clearly outmatched. The way the story is going I am expecting no rescue and a lot of death. They are all in over their heads

Mina She

Hahahahaha most of the guys are not mages hence would be more helpful in a direct conflict than on water, though I do get your point. There are just too many yellow graded enemies around . Kai and Rain’s grades are only impressive when you consider their age. But when dealing with older people it doesn’t make any difference. Then I think the rest of the crew is still firmly in orange. It kind of makes the whole plan foolish for Kai and friends.

Gabriel Medeiros

Agree that I'm glad we are getting to the climax of the arc. I'm less worried about how the team will persevere For one this guardtroop was fighting only Kai who was not trying to injure them for most of the encounter... so I'm not worried about the whole team fighting for keeps against a similar foe. Oraine alone could have taken them on. I do think eventually the team will face a big bad and be overwhelemed but will find a way to persevere in typical MC fashion. Shreded by space magic is my running theory.

Crapgeezer

"Thinking back, it probably wasn't a chance they found no paper maps." Shouldn't this be just "chance" over "a chance"?

wanderer117

The assailants were getting closer, advancing information behind the shield-wielding brute. suggested edit The assailants were getting closer, advancing in formation behind the shield-wielding brute. Kai summoned blue streams of Water mana without spares. I'm not sure what without spares is meant to mean here. He covered his mouth with hand, gulping. suggested edit He covered his mouth with his hand, gulping. Thinking back, it probably wasn't a chance they found no paper maps. suggested edit Thinking back, it probably wasn't chance they found no paper maps.

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! Well I'm really looking forward to this fight finally. My only problem remaining is simple... if some random guardtroop sitting on shore gave them trouble in addition to all the paid off guards and villagers... There shouldn't a be a chance for them to even free anyone nevermind escaping with a bunch of weakened captives AFTER the fact...


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