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Chapter 296 - Lost in the Mist

🕑 Added 2024-11-09 02:52:44 +0000 UTC

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Jon

This is probably my favorite story. Hope author is doing okay. 🙏

Alex

Yeah Something is off about the arc as a whole !100%

Gabriel Medeiros

I think Drew wanted to lay some threads with Vals chapter for readers to follow up on.... Val's school, the moon trials, and a future intervention by the republic against the cultists. And the Val/Kai interactions are fun as well. He probably also wanted a skip to justify the increase in Kai's attributes, which are so close to orange class you know we are getting a set up. But I think theres something off about the arc as a whole. Hopefully that gets resolved in the edit

A B

Edit suggestion: Rarely anybody noticed his subtle touch, even among people -> People rarely noticed his subtle touch, even people cloaked us, while we -> cloaked us while we leveraged on her staff -> leaned on her staff

Alex

I'm if I am.alone in this but last few chapters after the time skip feel like written by a different person. The story feels disconnected and not well flowing. Slightly less interesting and not as funny or exciting

visigoth

Kea: you’ll never find anything Also kea: what did you find?

Mina She

Thanks for the chappy. Like that Kai is starting to be pro active again. I was just trying to imagine this group as a team and it’s a pretty weak one. I hope we will be rid of Kea and her team after this. Don’t think they are bad but Kai makes them redundant and he really isn’t a team player . He is a jack of all trades, lack of mastery doesn’t really matter with higher level skills. He has always been a solo act and it shows. Flynn is good at being support and Rain and Hobbes are good at being just there unless they are needed. It kind of works. Kea and Caeli give boss energy without the power to back it up and the relationship feels more resentful than just a bit of rivalry, which just kills the dynamic. I still think the team is in over their heads and am hoping that’s the direction the story is going to take, with the team barely surviving and some hard lessons at the end of the day. Maybe a use of a rare treasure from Rain or his mother finally finding him to save the day.

Stephen Pearson

Thanks for the chapter! :-)

Gopard

Thanks for the chapter! The whole "Did she just apologize to me???" Trope gets old after a while for now its still fine but reading such things from the same character about another feels unnesserarily dramatic at some point^^

Scion

Thank you so much for your creativity


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