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Chapter 315 - Last Stands (Part 2)

🕑 Added 2025-03-29 07:50:54 +0000 UTC

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Edit suggestion: he starkly accelerated -> he accelerated span his body -> spanned his body It was since her foolish sister’s passing that she hadn’t seen someone in denial of hard realities to such a degree. -> It had been since her foolish sister’s passing that she had seen someone in denial of hard realities to such a degree. (better) She hadn’t seen someone in such denial of hard realities since her foolish sister’s passing.

meh

No rerun was correct. She ran them one but inconsistencies are poppies up so they will rerun them

Federico

TFTC "Healing his channels to a useful slate->state was going to be a pain" "She would have to rerun->return background checks on both boys" "It was since her foolish sister passed ->passing that she hadn’t seen someone in denial of hard realities to such a degree." "Her eyes widened in the umpteeth->umpteenth shock of the day." "It was always usually->unusually bright for his grade"

Trevayne

I am guessing his full power needs to be in direct contact with water. I also think he has been hiding his full power anytime he was in the water unless they were going to die.

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter.

wanderer117

I don't really buy it. Rain's mind control didn't work on Kia when they were on a ship in the ocean. Now that Rain is in a lake his powers work on a target one grade higher? IDK, I haven't liked the horror movie arc much (basically since Kia arrived in the village) so this might just be a matter of taste.

Doug Wills

Then you're going to be very happy with the next arc. :)

Doug Wills

What was the main plot that went unresolved exactly? This arc was about trying to save Niel. Like, they came here to find their friend (success), save him (he is dead), and get out. It was a pretty straightforward objective. What plot did you want resolved?

Caleb Reusser

More than a little disappointed in the end of this book. It doesn't feel like it resolves the main plot point of the book. It feels like it is ending in the middle of the climax. No falling action, definately not resolution.

Kris Piskorski

Solid ending to the arc so far, but I'm really hoping for Kai to go to school!

Some Guy

TFTC

Malcolm Haynes

Tftc. Great chapter!

Bead

So how much favor do you get for escaping an enemy at green 👀

Disclancer

I wonder if Rain feels compelled to take Kai home to try and get his mother to help him with any lasting damage that did. Treachery in the Siren courts would be a good arc

Mina She

Also potential new skill for Kai? There must be some skill that allows a person to overextend their channels and skills.

Mina She

Tftc. Kai is going to just die of jealousy. Mind blown. Rain is so impressive that it’s easy to forgot that he is weak when away from water. Higher race for sure. Haaa, hopefully book 5 has more world building. It would be really fascinating to know how the power scales between the classes, grades and species.

Jacob Ogundare

The chapter end bait rly got me good

Thomas Prior

Fantastic chapter. Looking forward to seeing how the arc ends and the next arc


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