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Chapter 369 - Cashing In

🕑 Added 2025-11-21 01:20:58 +0000 UTC

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신현준

Gracias

Gorane

As you reach the second milestone, you are presented with three choices to continue your journey. Four choices

Gorane

Green is a while away, but before his yellow profession he should get all of his main affinities over 70. Since his orange profession had a requirement of having affinities over 50. Water already is 71, nature is 68 and and space 67. Space might get a boost if Hobbes skill gets ti green or hobbes gets to green. Nature could go to 70 if he wins another one of these affinity boosts or buys one from someone

Gorane

I really liked this chapter, im glad the treatment got some attention, but not enough atttention to hotg a chapter. I am very glad that you made Elijah give advice to him on the skill choices. It really feels like Kai is progressing besides just numbers going up

Vyle

One of my favorite chapters in a while. We got skill upgrades, a space affinity upgrade and new gear (amulet). That's all progress of the progression fantasy variety. The conversation with Elijah was enjoyable. We got a bit of foreshadowing about what Kai's goals and what he'll do in the future. Also Kai sneaking around is funny. He's also clearly improving his cloaking abilities.

Johan

Tftc

Alex

This is one of the less exciting chapters and feels like a repeat of some of the info. The treatment description was a little underwhelming and abrupt. Conversation with Elijah was ok but evolving the skills somewhat redundant.

Mohit

Anytime there's a specialization that's never commented on I presume that he selected stay the coarse

Mohit

Loved the over-eager scientist that is looking for data BTW. Hope we see more quirky background characters in the future.

Joe Scrotejack

edit suggestion: And the Parallax Eye didn’t look like the easiest affinity TREASURE to use.

Doug Wills

So... Kai has never paid attention to his own birthday. And that's not how the memory skill works. His memory skill is explicitly an active one. He would need to actually use the skill to put his birthday to memory for it to be related to him actually remembering. It's also not 2025. He doesn't have the date in front of him all that often I would imagine. Hell, I've forgotten it was my birthday until waking up to texts from my friends and family on the day of before.

Acidsz

I will rebel if we don’t get body augmentation upgrade on screen

Secret Weapons

I get that you like to write the MC as a total and complete social cripple, who honestly reads as severly autistic in any situation unless its about magic or fighting... but COME ON. He's supposed to be very intelligent AND he even has a memory skill now. Him not knowing his own birthday is just ridiculously silly.

Catherine

He hasnt chosen it yet. Or at least not told us what he chose.

Trevayne

Thanks for the chapter.

Maximof

Love the story , things are building up

Mohit

Probably a sword is my guess

C

No don't leave! I still want to see the other 2!

Peter Smith

Or maybe hobbes will further enjoy spices on his fried fish

David

I love how hobbies triedto take the superior bond! Kai might become more arrogant and eat fish though...

Some Guy

TFTC

Jon

What's in the box? 📦

Wiggles, Rank C, Level 4

67

Mohit

I suspect you were going for a joke with the line "We lack sufficient experimen—tal data to draw definite conclusions." Instead, how about saying "experimental subj—data to draw definite conclusions."

Jim

I’m guessing a sword.

wanderer117

Okay, traight to business. suggested edit Okay, straight to business.

Jim

Water: 71 Nature: 68 Space: 67 Earth: 60 Shadow: 53 Air: 23 Darkness: 20 Fire: 16 Mind: 11 Dream: 10 Light: 10 I hope it does help as the bond grows.

Heraclitus

Obvious options were obvious. At least in terms of Kai's situation.

Erick

What are each of his affinities at now? And do you think Entwined Fates will increase his spatial affinity even more?

Richard Brown

The last gift he gave him has helped him so much..I hope this is just as good

Mohit

Did Body Augmentation stay the course or am I misremembering?

Dizzy

You repeated a paragraph! Collecting the Trials’ rewards had taken an exhausting amount of creative subterfuge, but he was satisfied with his choice. The Wellspring Amulet rested cold against his chest—a clear aetherstone set in a lattice of chromium and runes.

Bloodorange17

There's a double paragraph in the middle where you wrote it two different ways and it got left in

plancking

Collecting the Trials’ rewards had taken […] a clear aetherstone set in a lattice of chromium and runes. This paragraph is duplicated


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