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Harry Potter and The Force of Magic Chapter 2 (Holy Magic)

🕑 Added 2022-10-05 18:48:10 +0000 UTC

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Eva Cole

Great chapter

Neko

This was a nice chapter, with a small error when James spoke when Harry reached the door under the floor. You said: "Surrender with your friends" which would have been: "Surrounded by your friends." My question is: why told anyone about the book with Holy Magic? Isn't that family Magic? Friends can turn enemies and its best to keep something for yourself. Especially Magic, if I was Harry, don't share this Magic with anyone. Its the same with your vault, you are not sharing your pincode with your friends.

Drinor

Thanks for reading my story.

J T

Definitely intrigued by this story as well.


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