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The Conqueror of The Shinobi World Chapter 29 (A Night of Red Moon)

🕑 Added 2022-03-10 21:07:26 +0000 UTC

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Jaideep

I would just suggest one piece of advice as this applies to both your Naruto FF. Make a sheet for each with naruto's powers on it and the ninjutsu he knows. Approach combat situations by looking at the sheet and see what you want restricted. The biggest issue you have is you character has way too many powers given to him and rather than keeping track of them you keep adding new stuff for combat situations. You end up adding width instead of depth to your character's ability base. In both your Naruto fics you still have failed to establish a combat style for either of them. The reason rpg games have classes is to primarily establish a combat style/system and then develop it by adding depth to it. Having chakra chains and wood release as the same time is stupid as they both conflict unless wood release is just used for jutsu. I would advice you to look at crafting a legacy on ff and god of shinobi by abhijit katta on ff to give you an idea of how the characters have a established/build to a fighting style.

Drinor

Well, I will make sure to not do that mistake again, I might change this chapter slightly, but not sure yet.

Jaideep

A simple shuriken kahe bunshin plus great breakthrough would have wiped out the ame genins.


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