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Dance of The Dragonwolf Chapter 29 (Set Your Wings Free)

🕑 Added 2023-10-31 20:26:37 +0000 UTC

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LT Butterfly287

Honestly, I really wish we could move past the past life things. It might just be me, but I personally feel that Jon should have let go of his pain and toils from his past life and embraced his new life by now. One major flaw I have noticed in your writing is that you kind of get lost in describing things. I will mention the chapter where Deamon was thinking about Cannibal when they were sailing to Kings Landing. Throughout said chapter, you spoke in a circle from start to finish, reiterating the same points over and over again, just using different words to say the same things. I feel you should try to move on from a single point rather than committing to it and nothing else for an entire chapter, because it kind of gets exhilarating to read.

Drinor

More of what happened with House Martell will be revealed later in the Story. Laena will be far more direct in what she desires than Rhaenyra, but I have planned how their stories will continue.

GrouchyGritic

Another amazing chapter!!! Very interesting developments so arianne was good but others in house Martells was assholes? From what I remember most of the women of martell were good in book and oberyns lover actually being the complete oppiiste of tv show version. Oberyn did have some asshole/ shady moments but seem ok. But his brother he just kept too much secrets and it destroyed and poisoned the family he waited to long to act. Can’t wait to see jon and the girls Laena is already team jon I bet her parents will be pissed🤣 and rhanerya too I feel so bad for her in canon it’s nice she has the 2 of them around her


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