The Dark Side of Magic Chapter 8 (Shadows of the Sith)
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Comments
Cody
This story is incredible so far although I do wonder what that other pressence is that Anakin felt.
Hadrian v.E.
Daphne!
Drinor
Iβm happy to hear that
daniel kim hansen
Oh man that's really love this one it's so comedy lazed I've been laughing my ass off great work man
TheWateringWizard
In All Things Balance is fantastic. It has a big sequel, IATB: the Rise, that is sadly unfinished and will probably never be. Totally worth the read though
Ryan
Also Last Second Savior is great too
Ryan
@Drinor - The best are: Magic of the Force (long as hell and ongoing), Still haven't found what I'm looking for, Same Song Different Verse (my favorite), The Battles Within
Ryan
Yeah, but that's HP in Star Wars, this is Star Wars in HP - harder to do.
Drinor
Iβm happy to hear that and do you know any good HP x SW stories?
Drinor
Iβm happy to hear that. Harry is still 11 years old, but his life has changed, and sometimes, he is more mature than he should have been.
Drinor
That was a mistake on my part. Thank you for pointing it out. It was supposed to be Tonks instead of Susan, but then I changed it to Susan since Anna is her big sister in this story. I forgot to change that part of the dialogue.
Hakai
"No, we need someone to tell the teachers. Plus, you know more spells than I do β if something happens, you'll be more help to them than to me." What? Lol how does Susan know more spells than Harry, let alone any even close?
Erinnyes
There's some really good unfinished ones. "Still haven't found what I'm looking for" is amazing, but dead. π’
Ryan
There are some good Harry Potter in Star Wars ones, but most of the opposite just donβt hit
Ryan
Youβve done a great job with these drops - this will end up as the best Star Wars in Harry Potter fanfic
Alkole
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Erinnyes
An absolutely excellent series of chapters. You've done a wonderful job keeping Harry believable as a mature 11 year old, but still an impulsive child prone to reckless decisions and short term reasoning. On the flip side, it's very easy to make young characters deeply annoying, but you've run the line between "implausibly mature" and "annoying kid" extremely well.