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Harry Potter and The Force of Magic Chapter 33 (A Gift from A Veela)
🕑 Added 2024-04-07 20:05:55 +0000 UTCClick the LINK Below to Read the Chapter
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1LTFvd83ThLecuSU-D_zkVGgIV5nJwCTieJKjTXFOJI0/edit?usp=sharing
Comments
Drinor
Iβm glad you liked it. More will be revealed about Holy Magic, including spells that will shake the world.
GhostnKC
This story has quickly become one of my favorites. There is humor, action of many types, and new abilities that I want to know more about. Originally I thought that holy powers would be about healing and defense. I'm glad to see there is more to it.
Drinor
I'm glad you liked, and it would be very fun if every student tried to do that.
TheWateringWizard
I laughed at the idea of owls dive-bombing the cup. Loved the chapter
Drinor
Yes, it wouldnβt be fun if the challenges were exactly the same. I love Harry/Fleur stories, too.
Genesis87
Like I said before, I Love Harry and Fleur pairings. Are you gonna do anything special for the tournament selection?
Drinor
Iβm glad you liked it
Drinor
Iβm glad you liked it. I love writing their scenes, especially the spicy ones π
Setsuna
Thanks for the chapter.
MAEGHT Maxime
Well i Donβt have any problem for me, i love this chapter for the relationship between Harry and Hermione, the teasing by Tonks and the letters from fleur
Richard Alvarez
Wizards and logic donβt mix
Nicholas Fritz
No problem, just wanted to be of help cause you are writing some amazing stories and everyone makes mistakes.
Drinor
Roger that, and sorry for the mistake. English is not my first language, so itβs a little difficult sometimes. Thanks for telling me.
Nicholas Fritz
Just wanted to say that you used the words owns or owned instead of owed or owe, otherwise amazing chapter as usual.
Drinor
I just fixed it. Can you refresh the page and tell me if itβs still doubled?
Joshua Naugle
At least for me the story is doubled in the text above
Drinor
Thank you for letting me know.
Gregory Sullivan
I dont know if it's just me but there were some parts that were repeated a few times as well as some words cut off here and there. Not sure if its just on my ens or not.
