A Hungry Dragon Chapter 4 (Grief is the Price we pay for Love)
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Mimi13
Welp, there goes any sympathy he would’ve had for wildlings like in canon 🤷🏽♀️
Eva Cole
That's good to know cause fear can be used as a good weapon but if you only depend on it then that fear will turn to outright hatred
Advent12
I was seriously thinking he was going to do that lol but then I was like ‘ooohh maaann’ well there’s always the next person to who takes or tries to take someone of something from him. Perhaps during the Greyjoy rebellion?… pretty please!
Drinor
Lady Bella was a good-hearted person in the world of GoT, a world that has no mercy for good people. Jon will become a beast because of this, but not all changes will be good.
TheWateringWizard
Damn what a terrible ending… but it’s also a really good and important lesson for Jon to learn. It will serve him well in the future. Lady Bella was a great character, sad to see her go
Drinor
That would be fun, and yes. I’m a big fan of GoW and Dark Souls games.
Leo
Very nice. Since you obviously know the material...have you thought about writing a God of War story? Kratos, Atreus and Mimir just taking a stroll through Westeros and causing mayhem XD
Drinor
He will be a Beast.
MAEGHT Maxime
Jon wiil have no mercy against his enemy
Drinor
Aegon is the Conqueror, and Daeron is ‘The Young Dragon,’ the one who conquered Dorne.
Lost_Monarch
Which Aegon and Daeron, if I may ask?
Drinor
He is not just Maegor; he will have traits from Aegon, Tywin, and Daeron. Jon will have his loyal army because, unlike Maegor and Tywin, he will learn that fear isn’t everything.
Longclaw16
Jon being Maegor is not necessarily a bad thing... he just needs to always have 1) a loyal army and 2) an inner circle of family and friends he can trust and who are always loyal to him and love him
Drinor
Jon wasn’t exactly in the best state of mind to think that. Her words made him react so fast that, for a moment, Jon thought someone else had stabbed her.
Drinor
This event will determine who Jon will become in the future of this story. His heart won’t exactly be stone; there will still be a place left for love.
Daeron Targaryen
Okay, Jon should’ve blood eagled her honestly the death was too clean and quick.
Winter
I guess in a way his grandfathers quotes and finally the last lesson is that lady bellas death is what shapes jons thinking and heart turns to stone so his enemies will never use it against him again
Drinor
Bella was a good soul, but Tyrion, from the books, perfectly summarised what happens to good people in this world. “Daenerys Targaryen is a sweet girl.” Illyrio insisted. “Then the Iron Throne and Westeros will tear her into thousands of sweet little pieces,” Tyrion added.
Drinor
Yeah, the character of Anden is inspired by Kratos.
Robert Brown
Postscript, Thanks for the chapter! I can't wait for the next one.
Robert Brown
As much as I saw this coming, I'm still going to miss the kind hearted Bella...A woman too kind for the world she lived in. May she find peace in death, for she will not be forgotten.
Dietro981
Yep
Michael Marquardt
Wow we have kratos flint in this story
Drinor
Lyarra will be there for Jon. But this death has left a mark on Jon, which will shape how the story will go.
Robert Hernandez
That's so said for Bella to die hopefully Lyarra can comfort him great chapter by the way
John M Pogue
Both equal parts good and bad
Drinor
The Best One. 🔥
John M Pogue
A dangerous combination to be sure.