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The Dark Side of Magic Chapter 10 (The Shadow that Whispers)

🕑 Added 2025-02-10 21:37:22 +0000 UTC

Comments

Cody

I am starting to suspect that Palpatine is now hitching a ride inside of Quirrel's mind though I wonder if he replaced Voldemort or if they are both attached to him now.

Drinor

I'm really sorry about this. I will make sure to go back and rewrite a few parts from Chapters 10, 13, and 14.

alecB

Ok, What the hell? In the chapter Flitwick asks to tutor him, he also asks him if he wants to join the dueling club, but during the chapter where the first lesson happens, it's as if that never happened, and he asks again as if he never did but now it requires special screening from the headmaster. Then during the troll incident, it is explicitely stated that the shield charm is for later years, but now all first years are learning it?????? You keep contradicting yourself!

Drinor

Glad you like it

Mark McKenzie

Thanks for the chapter

Drinor

Amelia will be on Quirrell’s ass the moment she finds out that he set the troll loose.

Drinor

Hermione won’t be part of the Harem, but she will have a minor role in the story.

Drinor

Well, there’s a reason why he changed overnight, and it has nothing to do with therapy.

Drinor

There will be more, especially now that Amelia will met with Harry

Ryan

I found myself wondering why Harry was holding himself back so much, and then there is a Quirrel scene, and I instantly understand.

pra86

Ugh... Hermione continues to be annoying as usual. Small mercies that she doesn't have a larger role in this story.

Witherdale

The Tlot Phickens

Erinnyes

Most excellent chapter, I absolutely love what you're doing with Quirrel. This is how Quirrel should have been. Warm, competent, friendly, and trying to be an ideal confidante to Harry. Wonderful work!