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The Tarnished Potter Chapter 8 (The Red Chains of Order)

🕑 Added 2025-03-08 21:10:49 +0000 UTC

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Drinor

I'm glad you liked it. Millicent and Harry will eventually get together; it will be wholesome. The NPC with the letter is Irina, and she is killed by a Misbegotten.

TheWateringWizard

Great chapter! Glad Millicent will be more present in the story. Can’t wait to read more of this story. I hope Harry can help other NPCs who got a terrible fate, like the girl who wants us to give a letter to her father (forgot her name).

Drinor

Harry doesn’t have Torrent yet.

Rogue

I assume Harry forgot about Torrent, or hasn’t been shown how to summon him? He’d help with traversing the land.

Drinor

Thank you for pointing it out. I will fix it. It will take a long time until Harry reaches the Haligtree; a lot of things will happen before that.

Jaroslaw Jarmul

Interesting use of Millicent. Looking forward where this will go. And if they make it to the Haligtree. The only issue in this chapter is mentioning Blast-Ended Skrewts. The story started during the events of year 3. Those abominations were introduced in year 4 for the Triwizard Tournament.


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