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The Tarnished Potter Chapter 11 (Threads of Fate)

🕑 Added 2025-06-06 16:34:55 +0000 UTC

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GodoftheSeas21

Love the story but I agree with TheWanderingWizard about the Harry's friends monologue. Harry sounds like Draco When I hear "what will Hermione do?" Or "Hermione this or Hermione that." All I hear is Draco saying "My father will hear about this" Still love the story though

TheWateringWizard

Love the story but I just have to point out that Harry’s very repetitive inner monologue of “Had Sirius escaped the Dementors? Were Ron and Hermione safe? Had anyone been hurt?” or any similar variation is getting pretty old. I get what he’s feeling but I got it the first time. Plus it should be clear to Harry that he’s not leaving this world within the next couple of hours so he needs to realise that either time froze in the HP world he left and therefore he has nothing to worry about for his friends, or there’s nothing he can do about them anyway because considering the danger they were in, it’s probably too late to influence anything. Sorry if it’s too harsh, it isn’t my intention to be rude, just wanted to point out something that’s been bothering me for quite a few chapters now. But after the double mention in quick succession at the start of the chapter, I had to talk about it. The quick mention of Hermione being the planner or similar is fine but otherwise I’d rather follow Harry immersed in the Elden Ring universe.

Austin Chambers

May i have some more please

DarkLightKage

One of my favorite stories right now, looking forward to more!

Drinor

Well, the Comet Azur build obviously, it will one-shot everyone. 😁

Drinor

Yeah, that was my bad. I never really used Godslayer's Greatsword that much but Harry will use it for Story reasons, I usually just use Bloodhound's Fang or other strength weapons.