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Red Hot Riding Hood - page4. Sexy nun.

🕑 Added 2022-05-07 09:58:37 +0000 UTC

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Carlos

I know. You're a class act. I can't wait for the next panel. How long will the comic be?

x-wilderness-x

Thanks! Just some of my imagination of your mythical world. Why I chose to use the eccentric word "yo". Very popular 90s genre to shock and amaze, used by some dark and light skin individuals such as a form of greeting as in "Yo, my homie!" or in criticism "Yo momma!" Looks like after 30 years it's still able to get a shocking response.

Rino99

And now I understand everything.) It's all right, don't worry, it's just a fantasy. In my scenario, the dialogue will be somewhat different.

Carlos

No. Not in the panel. In the comments below, X-Wilderness-x added a line for Jessica and Shanique. The line for Shanique was what I was commenting about. Your panel was great, particularly the dialogue for the Bad Boys and for the other Orc officer, and I pointed that out.

ShinjiTao

What the hell are you talking about???

Rino99

I don't understand what dialogue you mean. Shanique only appears in the last panel and has no dialogue.

Carlos

The comic is great but X-Wilderness-x dialogue for Shanique was badly stereotypical and insulting. Kind of killed a great panel. Why have her character speak in broken English? The other orc doesn't. Perhaps it's because of her name? Despite the blaxploitation movies and television shows that pander to people who want to feel superior, the vast majority of black people don't speak that way and find it insulting. Take Will Smith and Martin Lawrence in the same panel for example. Plain English and it took nothing away from the scene. That said, X's line was good; the so-called ebonic dialect was insulting and unnecessary.

Rino99

Yeah, I try to make comics fun and memorable. Thanks for your feedback 😊

Rino99

doesn't sound right?

Rino99

thank! You have great dialogue 👍👍

Rino99

I won't reveal Roger's line. His wife deserves more attention

Rino99

😊I'm sure you heard it

Carlos

Let's see... Who Framed Roger Rabbit, Bad Boys, Breaking Bad... all on one page. And the hits keep on coming!

Carlos

"Shut yo' mouth'? Really?

x-wilderness-x

Mike: You have the right to remain silent. You Roger? Because, I'm Mike Lowrey! [Meanwhile in the interrogation room.] Jessica: I promise I’m not hiding anything. Shanique: Shut yo’mouth while I finish this cavity search. Awesome work Rino!!!