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Long Live the Emperor: Chapter 3

🕑 Added 2022-07-28 19:53:59 +0000 UTC

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Michael Jackson

Im liking it and as has been said playboy version ending up in our world by fleeing his responsibility in the medieval society and our guy bringing tech into the playboys society ergo making things better saving his fiefdom etc, base building magic swords socery and pretty girls whats not to like.

Loukemia

Also, I have to wonder, if people can transmute gold/precious metals than what is this world's scarce resources(trade) done in. The zeal crystals were so in spellheart as an example.

DiabolicalGenius

Well, Marvin skipped over the final details before the transfer and Alvin is clearly better at paying attention to the details while Aldrich seems to be on the thoughtless side, so it's likely the former gave the latter what he needed to know to manage on Earth without making a big mess, while Alvin wasn't told much more than what he heard when the offer was first made in chapter 1. That how I see it.

Justin Webb

the problem I can see Aldrich having is not knowing any of alvins passwords so he will literally have very little access to things without Alvin helping him

Justin Webb

I think you should use the characters original name regardless of the body they are in that way the reader knows which character they are reading about. (anything else is to confusing)

DiabolicalGenius

Glad to hear. That was half savvy due to my familiarity with the genre and your previous work, half how I want to see it go. So it's all good and I'm looking forward to any surprises you have waiting. If it's like this I won't feel too bad taking a break from Spellheart and Paladin, or waiting a little longer to see Amazon. I'd like to see where this goes.

Marvin

Who gave you my notes! XD. You're pretty warm, but I still have some exciting stuff planned besides what you've mentioned!

DiabolicalGenius

Well, I can see where this is going. Alvin is going to make a few improvements and see how he could fix the problems in the territory and even build it up again, without committing too much. Only to switch back and find that Aldrich hasn't been attending his classes, has been having a good time with the cash got for the lamp once he worked out how to use Alvin's account and has gotten hooked on the modern world and wants to stay (hope and pray he hasn't discovered recreational drugs). Probably wants to finish upgrading the body on that side and pursue some kind of athletic career. Seeing how his life back home is being derailed and will take a bunch of effort to sort out, while on this side he can live like a king if he can just sort out the mess his soul twin left behind. I'm also betting Alvin will discover that female spirits are much more responsive to a man who seduces them and shows them a good time, rather the abstinent Aldrich who keeps it professional. From there he can introduce them to his tastes in dungeons and teach them all to be good girls who are willing to do whatever he asks. How is it? Am I warm?

Loukemia

I think keeping them separate at the start is good. If you change up how the character refers to themselves it can indicate that change in mindset as well.

Dr. Redbush

I’d still call them by their original name, with the exception of the other people who don’t know about the switch. If you called him by the body’s name while switched, I think that would be confusing to the reader. Just my opinion.


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