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Long Live the Emperor: Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2022-09-04 15:01:02 +0000 UTC

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DiabolicalGenius

Inspiration can be weird sometimes. You find it with a lot of things, the harder you try to make it happen when you aren't feeling it, the worse it gets. Yet the moment you stop trying and just let your mind wander, it just suddenly clicks. Happens to people all the time. He handled that curse well enough. He'll probably need more skill or help from an appropriate spirit to handle it with no damage at all. And he seems to be getting closer to Mabel too. Now lets just hope he gets to where Clover is before that guy finds her.

Marvin

Very important reasons 😉

Loukemia

The chapter turned out good. I've found it can be difficult not to be one's own harshest critic. Hopefully the next chapter(s) flow a bit easier. Magus Terrance (and his ilk) will make a good foe(s) for this book. I do hope to see another helpful(non-jerk) dream mage . Al needs the help. Perhaps it could be another woman...for reasons.


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