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Long Live the Emperor: Chapter 17

🕑 Added 2022-09-12 15:00:09 +0000 UTC

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DiabolicalGenius

I like Mabel. She's goofy and eager to please, like a puppy. I feel a bit bad that he's building on a crush she had on Aldrich, but he was a jerk who never noticed or cared about her feelings, while our Al will treat her right. Even if he is seducing her for his own benefit, he'll also do his best to make her happy. Plus it seems like she needs someone to look out for her, since she's pretty gullible. I'm worried about what'll happen to her without him around. Mabel is a very old fashioned name, but I don't hate it. Kind of suits her in some ways. Only not sure if it's a name a count family with give to their daughter though. Nobles would use something more elaborate and pretty for a lady, right? Maybe something so unbearably cute, flowery and over the top that doesn't want to use it and makes him call her by a nick name instead? Like Lalatina~ But yeah, I like the silly but loyal to a fault type, so she's good. Clover and her pet cat vibe is just as good I think. That feeling that she's all over you when you're busy and thinking about something important, but can't be found when you actually want her and if you don't go check on her for too long, she might shred your drapes just to get your attention. She's pretty much a cat. As for the voice, I'd be very surprised if it isn't a fire spirit he inadvertently made contact with earlier when set his hand on fire, who wants to contract with him. Calling it. Third girl. Also liked father-in-law. Always nice to see a man in a haremlit work that isn't the main character, but is capable and someone you can talk to, rather than a rival or enemy that needs to be destroyed. Since the latter almost always happens in haremlit. You've always been alright when it comes to that though. Looking forward to see how he handles Terrasshole. Even if he realised Al is a dreamwalker, I'm sure he'll look down on some self-taught amateur completely. We can use that, can't we?

Justin Webb

I like the story as a whole and think Mabel character is fine maybe change her name though

Loukemia

So far I like the characters I should like. And dislike the ones I should dislike. I am kinda hoping Mabel's dad stays around as a likeable character. I would enjoy seeing more characters overall as for a former baron his barony seems kinda empty. Hopefully we'll see more as Alvin works his way back up. I also hope we see the maid again as that currently feels like a dropped thread. As to Mabel's name it does seem less sophisticated but it works. If she was a royal princess from the center of the empire the name might not work. You could always have Alvin give Mabel a nickname if it's too much a concern.


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