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Long Live the Emperor: Chapter 22

🕑 Added 2022-09-24 15:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Michael Jackson

Could explain identical twins and the link between them that we all have an identical twin only sometimes they are born in the same reality not different ones, also i like these small pov of different charachters as you get the story from that perspective, also i liked the bit about covered in gold to show of the wealth bit like some religious institutions that preach about being pious and that you must give up avarice as being evil all the while holding the symbol of the faith made out of solid gold.

Loukemia

Oh no, an excuse to reread Fostering Faust... Well it's not in the first book. We don't even see a mention of his boss merely the MC as a COO. The whole Sovereignverse aside (outside later Sales on Supe Heroes) running into doubles of people is a common (but fun) trope in parallel worlds/multiverses. The manager was a example because it's the only character we got some information on before the day dream started. She could also be a rogue dream walker, or a duchess, or a down on their luck Merchant, etc... it was a question I had. Alvin could be a unique case, everyone could have duplicates, or only those with a strong dreamwalking potential could have duplicates.

Marvin

I might be misremembering, but I seem to recall Arrand doing that exact thing in Fostering Faust (MC’s former manager being a bandit)

Loukemia

Actually I've been wondering if there were alternate versions of other people from Alvin's world (an example is his manager's double is a bandit). That might be fun to see explored.

Marvin

Good idea! Maybe later next week, after we put a few more chapters between this interlude and that one.

DiabolicalGenius

But then......you'll end up needing a break from the break your breaking from!!!! .........okay, I'll stop. A little Aldrich PoV interlude might be amusing. A little one off showing what he's up to on Earth, the culture shock and how he's messing things up while stubbornly refusing to admit he's at fault, or that there's even a problem at all. Insisting to the bitter end that he's totally going to find a way to fix his problems then give Al back his body and head home in triumph. Totally. Nooooooo problems. This little stint in a holding cell is just a tiny upset that he'll leave behind in short order annnnnnnny moment now~ That's impression he gives me so far, though we didn't see that much of him so I might be off.

Marvin

Let me know if you have any suggestions for other stuff you guys would like to see! We're getting to the point where I may start needing a break now and again (I know, I'm technically writing this story to take a break, but sometimes I need a break from my break!)

DiabolicalGenius

Maybe short, but nice to have a bit of world building. We know little about the setting so far after all. Makes sense that the monastary would be more concerned with their own power, internal politics and external rivals, than about some rogue demon off in the middle of nowhere. Unless one of their own dies there necessitating some kind of response. From a story perspective it'll be a good plot device to force Al to get good with magic fast and not rest on his laurels. We know he has a bad habit of just sitting back and procrastinating if he doesn't have a storm on the horizon, so this'll keep him sharp.

Marvin

Yeah, maybe! I want to do an interlude from Mabel’s pov too at some point, but I’m not sure where yet.

Loukemia

This was good. Given the books Aldrich had though it feels like the Spirit Monastery would have other rival Spirit master factions. Unless I was misunderstanding. Perhaps we can see Terrance get sent out to investigate in an earlier interlude. In which case the Monastery's description might be better there.


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