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Long Live the Emperor: Chapter 27

🕑 Added 2022-10-05 15:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

Yeah, maybe! I think I'm going to sit on it for a bit before the rewrite, then once it's clear in my head I'll get the final version out! Hopefully sometime next year after I finish Paladin or Spellheart.

Justin Webb

also with enough chapters to wrap this book up and set up the next one you'll have a unpolished new book, considering you randomly started this story you now just need to clean it up and you'll have another series going. 👍

Justin Webb

I liked this chapter. The family was interestingly dysfunctional and I thought the cripple Bert to be a perfect addition to the story and hope to see more of him.

DiabolicalGenius

Interesting family. I thought it couldn't get much worse than sister immediately trying to get Al to betray Mabel on arrival, but then the other brother and sister were mentioned. Even I'm starting to feel bad for the count now. Ah well. Nice to see Al's grasp on magic is improving. Now all he needs is to recall/steal Aldrichs combat skills and he's golden.

Loukemia

I enjoyed the chapter it was fun seeing Mabel's siblings. If they were mentioned in earlier previews those moments didn't stick out much. Bert seems cool. Maybe Alvin can find him a warrior spirit after befriending him to bring him good health and grant him a strong ally.


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