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Long Live the Emperor: Chapter 28

🕑 Added 2022-10-08 15:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

I’ll think about it. Gotta figure out what would be in it.

DiabolicalGenius

Well, I'm definitely looking forward to seeing that. Not even being angry or upset, simply stunned speechless. Just thinking "What the hell did he even do to get to this point......? How?".

Marvin

Al finding out what Aldrich has done on Earth. That scene should be the same even in the new version. Not sure where Al getting Aldrich's combat skills is going to line up yet. Just that it's going to happen.

Loukemia

I know we'll probably see another interlude from Aldrich but I'm kinda hoping we see an interlude from Count Grandhill and possibly Aldrich/Alvin's maid. Both seem like they be good for building the intrigue early as well as later in the story.

DiabolicalGenius

Which scene? Al finding out what Aldrich's done on Earth, or getting Aldrich's combat skills?

Marvin

Yeah, sounds fun. I'm still deciding how kinky I want to go with this one.

Marvin

Ha, I may skip ahead just so I can write that scene without committing to writing everything in between (which will probably need to be rewritten.)

DiabolicalGenius

"After all, how much trouble could one man get into with a few months and no knowledge of the world around him?" Oh don't mind me. Just cackling maniacally to myself. Nothing to see here~ Al finally got to play politics and we got to meet all the inlaws, so makes for a good preview of how this kind of thing will go in the final draft. Mixing magic and romance to start with, then adding in politics and empire building as things progress along with some hands on combat as he obtains Aldrich's combat skills. Sounds like a fun adventure.

Michael Jackson

I hope he defeats the spirit in the younger girl maybe he can put something nicer in her, i can see the older sister being more a bound in leather and rope, maybe he ties her up and leaves her all night and she likes it , could be be she likes a dog collar and becomes a sub


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