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Long Live the Emperor: Chapter 29

🕑 Added 2022-10-10 15:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

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DiabolicalGenius

I guess we'll need to beeware. Hope that set the bar low enough for you.

DiabolicalGenius

Well, that was a fun way to round of the first draft. Glad you're full of ideas on how to proceed, so I'm looking forward to seeing how the final story goes. It's all been good so far.

Marvin

Yeah, I was thinking I would move her to book 2.

Loukemia

I suppose without a maid storyline the maid doesn't make as much sense. But Aldrich would have house attendants like butlers,maids,cooks etc. Unless they all already fled you could have Count Grandhill dismiss them when he takes over. Once Alvin comes back to power he'd probably want to hire on those loyal to him though.

Marvin

😂

Marvin

I may drop her entirely tbh. I have so many love interests at this point and that we are reaching maximum capacity for a book 1 already.

Justin Webb

I think you should bring the maid back into the fold sooner in the rewrite.

Michael Jackson

Well thats the bee all and end all of that then, hive got a few ideas buzzing around but we can see beeyond this point as its a real honey trap that hes fallen into, at least its not to unbeelievable a story. I better buzz off now

Marvin

Haha, a beekeeper shared some cringy bee jokes with me, and I am setting the groundwork to share them with you guys!

Loukemia

Mabel was given an Apiary? How many stings did it take to convince you to add your bees to a story?


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