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Amazon Apocalypse: Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2022-10-29 15:00:08 +0000 UTC

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Kconraw

Thx for the chapter.

Marvin

It was pretty confusing on its lonesome. Chapter 15 doesn’t make sense without the context of chapter 14, so hopefully people were just scratching their heads instead of getting spoilers.

DiabolicalGenius

Well. I guess some of us got to enjoy a sneak preview of what's to come. Shame I missed it since I was sleeping.

Marvin

It should be fixed now.

Michael Jackson

I thought wtf did i miss shit happening like i was reading a manga in the wrong order

Marvin

Shoot. I copy-pasted the wrong chapter when fixing the error the guys are talking about above. Fixing now!

Spencer Jefferson

Am I only seeing half of the chapter? It just start in the middle of the battle with no explanation, am I missing something the last chapter ended with him accepting the High Sword position right?

Marvin

Huh, guess so. I could have sworn I fixed that. Maybe I uploaded the old version. Let me check. I ended up backtracking and adding a skill later, plus had to correct for a few missing skill points (talked about that 4 chapters ago when I was finishing up this scene).

DiabolicalGenius

Looks like Carter is realising what a pain in the ass running the impromptu community they're assembling in the wake of the apocalypse is gonna be. That's he's better off just focusing on hunting and levelling up with the support of the community in exchange for taking charge of it's defense. Also not going to figure out Craig's trick with the guns at a glance, though I'm sure they'll get it with a little time. I agree with the skills choice for Sakura. It's going to be a while before crafting takes off and melee combat is hard on weapons, especially if they're improvised and not designed for combat. Even with real human strength, let alone superhuman sytem enhanced strength. She'll end up breaking every weapon she tries to use and it'll only get worse the higher her strength value rises, without that skill. So good choice. I kind of regret him no being able to take the upgrade for mana bolt, but priorities and survival come first. Plus Deflect seems to scale unexpectedly well. Redirects ANY projectile once before needing 10 seconds to recast. Any, no matter how powerful? Might still save his life 100 levels later. Otherwise, now seems like a good point to try and get his other stats up to the 10 mark before he reaches level 10 and gets his class. Might improve what he ends up with. Strength and Agility aren't as essential to him now that he's focusing on range, but it'll only take 2 points each of the 4 he gets at level 9 to make Willpower and Charisma both 10. If he's going to be leading people into battle a lot in the future they might be worth investing on. After that we'll see what class he gets and go from there. Start raising his vitality again and keeping his intelligence up. That's what I'd do.

DiabolicalGenius

Yeah, I was gonna comment on that too. "We didn't gain any more levels, but the four hour mark came and went again, giving extra stat points across the board. My Intelligence hit twenty, and I was hoping for another opportunity to pick an skill that would use magic. No luck there. I guess the threshold to ten was the only special one. " and then near the end "I put three stat points into Intelligence, bringing the total up to twenty two. My Intelligence broke 20 stat points, and a new menu presented itself." So yeah, you need to fix that. Based on the stat table at the end of the previous chapter his int would have reached 20 at the 4 hour mark as you said, but when it came to level up you forgot that and added 3 points to the 19 even though with perception you added the 1 point from 4 hours and 1 more at level up to make 10. So you may need to move the skill acquisition to that earlier point and delete the part about not gaining anything. It's not like having Deflect earlier changes anything in this chapter after all.

Jesse

It looks like he hit intelligence 20 twice in this chapter, he talks about hitting 20 and not getting a skill early on, and then dumps 3 points in, hits 22, and gets a skill later? And then ends up with 23 at the end.


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