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Amazon Apocalypse: Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2022-10-31 15:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Kconraw

Hopefully he gets his agility up soon. That will be a very helpful stat/skill for him. Think you forgot to add the bonus int to stats at the bottom. Otherwise thx for the chapter. Also, are you only listing proficiencies 2 or above? Cuz you forgot the rifle one if not.

Marvin

Yeah, I think I will change them to bolt action.

Dutch Palmer

Lever action would be like the old Henry repeaters (think Western movies).

Dutch Palmer

Looks like you've already caught flak for it--pump-action rifle--can EITHER be bolt action, or lever action (though that would be a form of semi-automatic)

DiabolicalGenius

Well, as long as we get an amusing girl for the harem at some point, I can wait. I like the quirky type, the goofy type or even the crazy type so long as she can be kept in line by Carter. Having an Argona type who's focused on crafting and figuring out the mysteries of the system for Carter would be nice too. But there's no rush. Quality over quantity. Come up with a girl who you like writing and who you think we'll like before introducing her. We still barely know the two we currently have, so I'm all in favour of letting them be our focus for now.

Marvin

Yeah. I guess I could do a gender swap, but I kinda wanna focus on just Sakura and eventually Bridget right now. I'll think about it though. And yeah, it should be bolt action. As you've probably guessed, I'm not a gun buff.

DiabolicalGenius

“We’re going to murder Craig.” Quite the dramatic note to end on. I'm impressed at Ben's decisiveness and I'd love to see it happen. It's a line to cross though. Killing those escaped convicts after they assaulted their group and murdered that elderly woman was one thing, since he'd be responsible for every person they killed afterwards if he let them off. Still, while skirting the line Craig has yet to start killing people. Killing him preemptively sets a dangerous precedent. It might be best for Carter to take them a step back there and instead confront Craig with an ultimatum of some kind. Carter can face him and when it inevitably breaks down and Craig tries to murder him, it'll then justify killing him. Otherwise it sets the precedent of assassinating anyone who might be a threat, which is bad. Thanks for the little bit about Bridget's hair and the dirt seeming to not stick to Sakura. I'm glad you remembered my request in that general direction. That's plenty. Plus I'd like to hear if levelling up has any effect on age. Do people get better looking as they level? Do they age slower? Do you need to raise charisma if you want to look hotter? Things that I'd like to see touched on some time. "Maybe things would have been different if I had a semi-automatic weapon, but this was an older pump-action rifle, so it took me half a second more to fire another shot." Probably supposed to be a bolt-action rifle, since pump is usually for shotguns. Do they even sell pump-action rifles? Otherwise, I loved the clinic guys. There's always bound to be some people who go a bit crazy in the apocalypse and it's best for it to be funny. I kinda of wish the doctor was female and harem material so we could have mad scientist for the party for the duration, but I guess we don't want to just keep adding left and right. Wait until Sakura and Bridget have graduated to full romantic relations and brought up the possibility of polyamory before we start looking for other women eh? Plus Myrina is out there too. It's fine to keep harem growth at Paladin levels I'd say. Seems like staying in town will be more interesting this time around. He can always keep the hideaway in mind as a forward base for levelling in the wilderness, can't he?

Michael Jackson

Pumpkin headed scarcrows or willow the wisps skeletons doing thriller or zombie cheerleaders etc just go have a look at every helloween film in the last thirty years lol.

Loukemia

Doctors, zombies, and ballgags seem thematically on point for Halloween. Enjoy the holiday.


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