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Paladin of the Sword: Chapter 4

🕑 Added 2021-07-17 15:06:33 +0000 UTC

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Given that he has spent the last 15 years in Hell doing nothing but grinding, his power, skills and equipment levels make sense. The last upgrade for his sword required 1000 demons, in a normal setting that would have taken longer than 5 years for anybody not n this environment. The logic of the story works given the level of effort put in by the MC.

E.T. Spencer

I enjoy this story. Can't wait for more. Wish there was more to read now. Great job.

Marvin

I might do a bit more as a grow confident in the rest of the story/do beta reader revisions. These first four chapters are the only ones that I'm confident will be in the final book largely unchanged.

Marvin

I get what you mean, but give it a few more chapters. This is the last one with a 5 year timeskip. I just had to get Darren into adulthood. The rest of the story is at a more normal pace.

Mitchell Hall

More, this is good. More!! PLEASE!

Mitchell Hall

He grew up in Hell. But we haven’t seen him fight the demon lord and it already said that he struggled with a third layer demon lord.

Hartmann

Great series with enormous potential for future development! But I have to say that at least skill and equipment wise Darren develops way too fast! We are in chapter 4 but the mc already has mythic equipment.


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