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Amazon Apocalypse: Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2022-11-09 16:01:02 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

Yeah, I wouldn’t do this at the end of the book. This is only 1/4-1/3 of the way in though, so readers should trust that it isn’t really the end.

Michael Jackson

An author who i really liked did that in one of his books at the end, people who loved the series freaked out so much that he added a teeser chapter for the next book in an update to the original. Its ok to tease the fanboys and girls but not to the point of negative backlash, but i used to like the serials of flash gordon or the lone ranger "tune in for next weeks cliffhanger" lol.

DiabolicalGenius

It's fine. A decent cliff every now and then can be good for the story. So long as it's not a pay per chapter web serial that leaves every other chapter on a cliff to get you to pay to unlock the next one. It'll be less painful in a the novel when you can just start the next chapter.

Marvin

Sorry! Originally the chapter was supposed to go on for one more scene, but it was getting long and the cliff here was just too tempting... I'll make it up to you guys at some point!

DiabolicalGenius

Well, Carter made the bastard suffer more than I hoped, even if he couldn't finish the job before his cronies came to his aid. I cannot convey with words how much this cliff frustrated me though. Damn it Marvin! So yeah, Carter is dead. End of story. So saaaaaad. So what you gonna write next? Or more likely Carter's death is temporary. Though I'll be very disappointed if everyone gets a respawn or something. But I'm betting his regeneration is still going and will revive him with his heart beating, but not enough mana behind it to heal him fully. He'll wake up later feeling like shit. I hope Sakura finds him and carries him out first. Since a grown man still weighs the same after levelling up and she's put a lot of points in strength, carrying him around shouldn't be a challenge for her now. So yeah, nice job Michael. I'm betting Craig killed him when he tried telling him what to do, but I'm having trouble feeling bad about it. Every chapter now is a countdown to seeing this piece of shit get put down.


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