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Amazon Apocalypse: Chapter 21

🕑 Added 2022-11-21 16:00:11 +0000 UTC

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Kconraw

Thx for the chapter

DiabolicalGenius

Yeah, that's better now. Thanks for the fix.

Marvin

My bad. I rewrote part of that section because they were originally called "first guard" and "second guard" and I thought that was too confusing. I must have botched the fight with the edits though, and it's tough to catch context errors when editing for language use. So thanks for picking it out for me! It should be fixed now.

Michael Jackson

Just imagine if you had been cursed so everybody forgot about you like you dont exist, great for killing enemies but incredibly lonely. That poor buccaneer

DiabolicalGenius

Interesting Skills. No nice easy point-and-kill attacks that can be applied instantly, but all interesting. And all focused on learning and growing through understanding. Enlightenment is the most direct in gaining stats through meditating on secrets, but both Study and Disassemble both clearly lean in that direction too. Study lets you understand things through examination, while Disassemble lets you examine all the parts something is made of separately. Though he didn't really try to use Study on something first, Disassemble and then Study each part separately, I'm sure he'll do later. The combat application of Disassemble is there just from him improvising, though having something that will definitely kill a target when it works, even if you have to weaken them enough first, is quite useful. Lets hope he finds a way to learn more magic though. Unless you can only learn class Skills and the free ones from 10 and 20 and grow them later. If you can upgrade those skills later, then using the 20 one to enhance the 10 one might give you immediate results, but would limit you in the long run. Still, I curious to see where it goes. Share curse was also the only choice for Luck skill, no doubt there. Lucky Coin had no apparent practical use beyond winning coin tosses, Treasure Hunter might be nice in the long run and be good to take if he didn't have the death curse. But with it? Share Curse is his first possibility of a way to mitigate it, so he'd be a fool not to. BTW, you might want to take a second look at the end of that fight. For one, the buccaneer claimed to be higher level than the barbarian, even though Study told Carter they were both level 10. From there I get that barbarian took a few mana bolts and got caught by zombie bits in the dumpster, buccaneer came to help then got shot in the back with the rifle. Then it says "I stopped bothering to hide and stood, firing my Mana Bolts one after another. The first bandit was bruised and battered from all the zombie bites, so I targeted him first with my follow up spell. It was time to truly put my new class abilities to the test." and he used Disassemble on the barbarian. But even though he said "I targeted him first", the buccaneer isn't mentioned again. Carter just levels up then it says "Nobody had noticed me taking out two of Craig’s men." So did the buccaneer succumb to the bullet wound or did the mana bolts finish him off? It not clear how he died.


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