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Paladin 4: Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2023-01-02 16:19:00 +0000 UTC

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Justin

Okay, so I definitely like this chapter, the bit at the end was funny, but could have been shortened and worked differently. Less, bunker that’s perfect to hide from undead, and more escape route out of the capital. That is something a royal family would have. Maybe Claire has to stay behind to keep the path open for her people to get out for some reason and when they are finally out, the path closes and she has to wait for rescue after the undead are dealt with, but she knows she won’t get saved or something. Maybe keep Darren’s big hulking self seeming like a monster from her perspective, but Darren finds her after finding the other citizens and they tell him she stayed behind for them.

Marvin

Yep. That's what's important.

DiabolicalGenius

Well, as long as we get a tied up princess then it's all good. Everyone already said anything I might have thought of.


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