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Paladin 4: Chapter 17

🕑 Added 2023-01-11 16:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

A decent number of those sigil questions should be answered during the middle part of this book.

DiabolicalGenius

Seraph use Sigils too? Was it mentioned earlier and I just missed it? I suppose since they don't need them to gain power, they just use them to connect to the divine net and such. And to download Skills bought online. Online shopping WOULD be how they acquire new skills wouldn't it? What do theirs look like though? That also leads me to whether it's possible to produce new Sigils for humans too. Was the Lord of Light the only one who could make them, or did the Seraph just decide to keep them to themselves at some point? I'm surprised Darren hasn't looked into that already. Glad the thing with the kids was covered. At least there's some closure, though I'm kind of over it already. Callum's embarassing reunion will likely lead to eventual romance (assuming she's old enough), but that's fine as long as he's the one dealing with her and Darren doesn't have to pay any attentions. "Ashe just sort of sits by the end of the bed and watches creepily." Interestingly, not even a joke. She might really do exactly that. Especially if Cassandra decides to assert dominance over her in front of the other girls and rules that it's no nookie for Ashe until the rest of the harem is ok with it. Plus with no experience I doubt she has the resolve to get in the middle of Darren and that pack of ravenous beasts. She'll probably be overwhelmed. When they do get to it she'll probably go full shy sub and let him do everything. Plus we have had a lot of lewd chapters already and piling on more risks affecting the pacing of the story and making it less fun via too much of a good thing. Ashe deserves to wait until we've had a chance to build up an appetite again.

Marvin

I suppose I could change it. At this point, calling her Princess Thalia is kinda written into my brain while writing. Also, it might just be me, but I think princess sounds a little sexier than Empress for some reason.

Iron Akela

I’m surprised Thalia is still referred to as ‘Princess Thalia’ even though she’s the empress of Blackwind. Loved tying off the loose ends in Eastwood. Keen to see Kalaziel get his comeuppance


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