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Paladin 4: Chapter 24

🕑 Added 2023-01-28 16:00:05 +0000 UTC

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DiabolicalGenius

“You won’t be disappointed,” she promised, smiling at him. “I, Asuriel, am an incredibly skilled master of clandestine operations!” Could you say that a bit louder you silly bird? I don't think everyone in the city quite heard you~ We got an interesting bit of back story and plot development of what Kalaziel is up to. I guess if the Seraph use the Ophanim to run their internet too, then Kalaziel would be able to influence it just as much as they do the Sigil system. Explains why the heavens seem blissfully unaware of everything he's been up to on the surface, doesn't it?

Marvin

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Iron Akela

Couple of things: you mention Seventh Layer at one point when referring to the first layer (and do refer to it as the first layer a couple of paragraphs later). Second, the first time the tavern wench speaks its just ‘she said’, without saying who she is until the following paragraph or so.


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