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Spellheart 9: Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2023-03-05 16:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

Yeah, I'm going to have to save most of those ideas for a new harem series that I'll start after this one concludes. Long series in harem are no longer as viable as they were when I started this. I will take my time completing the series to make sure it gets a proper ending, but pushing it to its originally envisioned length just isn't going to work. Rest assured though, there will be another harem/cultivation story after this one.

horus scope

i’m sort of distracted by the fact he can just let everyone use his pocket world to safely go to the primordial world and settle an island there, or even use his space platforms to make settlements in space and do the same thing… the golems won’t be able to destroy the wanderer anyway even if he couldn’t find a way to move it so he could just leave it as an anchor. I actually thought this would be a much later arc after theo reached immortal and that he would solve the flaw in the defenses instead since the problem is trivialized and that the next few arcs would be exploring the catgirls, dealing with terminator, reuniting the fairies satyrs and dryads from the woods and wilds, and maybe checking out the goblins or something… I’m a little miffed :( this feels more like rushing to end the series

Marvin

I won't do something explicitly in the same setting, but Kitsune Cultivation (which I've talked about wanting to write for like 2 years on the Discord sever) is something along those lines. Its based off the outline of the story I meant to write when writing Spellheart, haha. But basically it's the same general idea as Spellheart, and I think it will be a good spiritual successor when Spellheart finishes.

Justin

Yeah, that makes sense. Everything else in Spellheart is great. The cultivation levels, the explanations behind how power is grown, all that is really well done. I’d honestly love to see some kind of sequel series set in the 10,000 worlds somewhere with some other power system just to see what you come up with. Goldmongering magic is the coolest thing to me.

Marvin

That is also something I'm very aware of. But it's a problem I kinda set up for myself in book 1 when I was a very new author, and at this point I can't really change it until we're closer to the series finale. Writing your first book is a bit like riding a wild horse -- You're just trying to hold on and you have little control over how it's going. Nowadays, I can steer a novel a lot better and The Wanderer would have ended up a lot more relevant even more than one million words down the line like we are.

Justin

See the problem for me, the only inconsistency big enough to distract me is the Wanderer not having any discernible purpose other than helping with the settlement building and quick cultivation. Despite the fact that it is a literal dimension hopping space ship belong to one of the people who apparently built reality. Except it’s somehow not able to move anymore for reasons. It kinda makes me feel like Theo is gaining power the wrong way. Spirit/body cultivation were made for mortals by the architects of reality so it’s reasonable to assume their power is different. Theo has a Mana generator and hasn’t questioned what else mana can be used for despite it obviously being way stronger than zeal.

Marvin

Shoot, thanks. Yeah, I copied and pasted this from my most recently updated book 8 notes. It looks like Patreon wrecked my formatting too. I will fix it.... eventually.

Marvin

Yeah, I was thinking about this laying in bed last night. The sense of progression for the series has stopped coming from building new rooms for The Wanderer, it's strictly from the cultivation elements these days. I have a few ideas I could pull to make The Wanderer more relevant again, but I'm questioning if I want to do so or if I'm better off just playing more into the cultivation aspects.

Justin

At this point, the exact number of points Theo has is arbitrary. He’s reached a level where he either is or isn’t able to get upgrades for the Wanderer. You can pretty much pull a number from nowhere and it’ll be good enough especially when you aren’t actively assigning point values to huge groups of monsters. Like you could say the fights with the dragons earned him 5 million points and it wouldn’t matter since he kinda has no upper limit on purchases for the Wanderer

Hartmann

The personal chamber still mentions Tim as imprisoned


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