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Amazon Apocalypse 4: Chapter 12

🕑 Added 2024-08-24 15:00:07 +0000 UTC

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jmundt33a

That’s a Myrina excuse, isn’t it?

jmundt33a

Stretches like this make me hope for the return of the regular schedule. Monday promises to be very entertaining.

jmundt33a

Should be into an energy beam.

jmundt33a

I don’t think his race and bloodline can short-circuit a Lodge history exam. I think his Artificing will be crucial for the first essay. I keep expecting his Artificing quest to pop at some point during this entrance exam process.

NovaZero

Or he lucks it with multiple choice

NovaZero

WRITING WITH SWORDS COUNTS OK

jmundt33a

I think you’re right about the first written.

Adam

Predictions on what the other exams will be? I think the last practical will be damage-based. The written will be on magic theory and enchanting/artificing.

Bryan Swanson

Flow of book 4 is awesome! I always love these tests that where the “young masters” under appreciate what the Main character can do because of false assumptions!

jmundt33a

It’s good that he’s building up bonuses so his complete lack of knowledge of Dragon Lodge history won’t affect his admission. Some of his Master Artificer experience might help with a scholarly essay.

jmundt33a

How often do the young students exhaust themselves before finishing off the grad school applicants? Is there one prodigy or tank per class, one every five classes? Once a decade? Rarer?

jmundt33a

I don’t think Borelius will puff up after the practical. I figure he might be terrified of his new friends. If he’s awkward and not arrogant, he strikes me as a slightly nurtured version of Sam Tarly. Not Draco.

jmundt33a

I love that the last two comments on Carter’s staff throw shade at Dram and his finger-singeing from beyond the grave.

jmundt33a

One possible inconsistency in the first test, before letting Mana Barrage loose, it seemed like Carter prepped 20 bolts but then he matched a bolt apiece to the targets and there were over a hundred of them.

jmundt33a

Two errors I saw Should be tallest, not talest Shouldn’t Mania and Dissonance be capitalized? And it’s lens. No e at the end. Also what kind of staff is that? is a question whether it’s genuine, condescending, or snide. Add a ? I think constrained, not restrained. Maybe even the one far in the distance Should be in the stands Should be most of them Should be to the weakest

jmundt33a

Love to read Rykard’s notes on each exam. “What’s the story with the Amazonian’s Mage consort? He hauled out a gnarled tree of a staff with an absolutely mammoth mana reserve and a rainbow of cores to different aspects, matched each target on the field to its corresponding mana flavor and then destroyed them all with corresponding bolts from some unknown multi form of Mana Bolt. The only thing that seemed to annoy him were the other applicants’ jibes about Mana Bolt being basic. He used Lightsculptor’s Brush to dress it up and make them shut up. And he aimed purely with Will! Possible Iron Will trait? But the Defense test was even sillier. The Amazonian just stood there with her arms crossed until the younglings burned themselves out. The mage broke out an Epic defense and evasion Skill and seemed to use the rest of the time to grind his Dodge proficiency. How could a battle mage get to C Grade with less than 10 Dodge?

Swordcollector45

Awesome chapter

Ens Ui

More! Why do I feel lang borelius will be an ass once he'd known that cyra is the matriarch of the samahain clan. Being an ass above carter that he should have cyra.

jmundt33a

Yup.

jmundt33a

Fun chapter. This feels like Saiyans in the World Martial Arts Tournament for the first time. In the best way.

Hans

I somewhat pity the lower ranked mages that have to attack Carter and Cyra. They really stood no real chance.

Adam

Well, looks like he got his dodge proficiencies mostly back.


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