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Amazon Apocalypse 4: Chapter 14

🕑 Added 2024-08-28 15:00:08 +0000 UTC

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jmundt33a

Or provoke another curse. Or possibly get him in contact with the afterlife supervisor again.

Wrathwind

Carter could make tons of contribution points by selling high school math textbooks to the dragon lodge lol

jmundt33a

There could be frostiness or confusion that thaws as Carter shows himself to be a decent sort and is as excited to improve his craft as he’s willing to share algebra and trig to make his own and his fellow students’ studies easier.

Adam

I disagree. I think the arrogant young master trope is overdone in the genre and doesn’t add much.

NovaZero

Divination unnecessary. Projection possible. Insulting local. Math! Dickheads!

NovaZero

**Impose metric intensifies**

Ens Ui

Well abit of that since the whole arc revolves around carter getting his basics and improving his caster skill on par. He can also create a new study since he introduced "math" to the dragon lodge. You can easily have this arc tied down within 6 to 7 chapters honestly.

Marvin

I'm interpreting this as a request for more arrogant young masters? maybe less like Dramonar who lasts a whole book and more short-term villains?

Swordcollector45

Awesome chapter btw in one of the paragraphs while they were training you forgot the t and is says raining

jmundt33a

Plus, it’s not that they don’t have or understand mathematics at all. The system is self-sustaining, supposedly tamper-proof and discourages academics that could fundamentally challenge or supplant it.

Ens Ui

Reluna is not in a Malfoy level of arrogance, same with Bor guy. The universe is vast and maybe someone in the academy can make his stay there more interesting lol

jmundt33a

Why? They already killed two off. And Reluna was humbled last book.

jmundt33a

If any of the D Level attacks from that defense test hit Cyra’s armor, they might count. Plus there’s active hunting, defense and raids in Crownhill. Being gone a full day should stack a bit. Plus he was gone a couple days before this as well. He has to be well under 2000 attacks from the target.

Nate Steadman

You have to remember they have access to magic chick's cuts corners with technological development. Like seeing the future. When you cand use guess and check like that many would stop there and not try to understand why

Adam

Time dilation and most recent status imply it’s unlikely his job quest will proc during this trip. Most of those using his weapon and armor are outside where time is moving at 1/3 the speed as in this world.

Sébastien Kingsbury

Nah, it's a pretty goofy piece of world building. Can go along with it because it's a little funny, but it's definitely a stretch

Seth

I find it somewhat unbelievable that that they don't know math. Maybe it's just my limited worldview.

jmundt33a

Should be the claim that you and I are married And the sky was high overhead? WTAF???!!! That phrase needs to change or disappear. Maybe and the night sky…. But even then it’s an awkward phrase. Should be diligent training Hotheaded does not need a hyphen Should be next to my bed. He doesn’t have a cot. Country hicks or country bumpkins might work better. Should be chatted Missing a verb. Maybe I mainly talked to the two girls we’d fought alongside Joined in consecutive phrases Unique in consecutive sentences The generation note goes here. Should be current descendants, current generation, or present-day descendants Should be skillbooks.

jmundt33a

I’m also interested in what sorts of specialists he’ll hire as his tutors.

jmundt33a

If you do the math correctly, you don’t need divination. It’s a nice bonus, though. So…how often do they hand out jade medallions at the entrance exam? I keep waiting for his Job Quest to pop. This is probably the most advantageous place for him to learn about whatever it is. Glad they finally talked a little and that they’re sparring again. This is as close to martial instruction as he’s been since the first visit to Valkyrie’s Watch. Did that work provide more proficiency boosts? Should be current descendants, current generation, or present-day descendants Should be skillbooks

Alex

Thanks for the awesome chapter!!!! Can’t wait for more!!!! Too funny that basic math is being viewed as a special form of divination!!!! 🤣

Ens Ui

More!!! Dang it. I want to see a Malfoy or some ass in this arc.


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