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Amazon Apocalypse 4: Chapter 19

🕑 Added 2024-09-06 15:00:07 +0000 UTC

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Vorsayo

So the system builders are The Ancients/Atlanteans from Stargate SG1 and Stargate Atlantis. A prior but different evolution of sentient life on Earth came about millions of years before humans evolved from monkeys and that grew well beyond our understanding of the universe and were able to alter the very fabric of reality to create the system to help their descendants before ascending?

Marvin

In terms of content, I'm confident I won't ever run out. That being said, I don't want to drag the initial story out any further than I have to before getting to a solid ending. We're already at the 700k word mark, which is pretty long for a harem series.

Marvin

There is one thing we know of that likes the color blue!

NovaZero

Doth thou fuketh around, hath thou foundeth out?

jmundt33a

So is the blue thing another Chaos God or have we finally glimpsed the other end of the spectrum?

Ens Ui

He took it.

jmundt33a

Word missing in second sentence. The door isn’t the path itself. It might reveal a path. Change the to three football stadiums Should be poring Should be were kids I still don’t like that use of before in his narrative analysis. Still feels either over-formal or ridiculous. Formal is good for the altar, but other instances? Should be lights You don’t actually have the spot where he picks the book back up.

jmundt33a

Might also be useful facing Surface Golem City.

jarret woods

this series has a lot of potential you can make this a 9 or 10 book series

jmundt33a

Book’s still in his hand.

jmundt33a

Oh dear. So that’s either a cultivator text, a techno text, or a combo. Something perfect for his current class and his bumped up job when he gets it.

Wrathwind

Did he leave the book or end up taking it?


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