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Spellheart 9: Chapter 57

🕑 Added 2023-08-12 15:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

I will add it to the list. The manuscript is out with beta readers right now, so I'm saving up everything that needs to be fixed to be done all at once rather than change things right away!

Loukemia

Hopefully this was already pointed out, but Theo mentions he will be " reaching the Demigod level as a Spit cultivator". This should be "spirit cultivator " as it is later on. Additionally in the sentence that follows he says he was "gold the burst of energy" which should be "told the burst of energy".

Orims

AHH makes sense, also it's still probably my second favourite type of magic after body cultivation (muscle wizzards are my favourite trope). I would just like to see more skilled practitioners all of the demigods there were kind of muscle heads with some nuke like wisps. I kind of think that they should have more nuanced powers even if the magic system started as training wheels. I like the Idea that they would be able to build hughe enchanted weapons in their groves and use them wherever they are as long as they stay connected or something similar.

Marvin

That is actually how I have ancient elves recorded as using Sacred Groves for in my worldbuilding notes. Basically a crutch to give to children as a stepping stone/handicap aid to reach greater things.

Orims

Theo becoming demigod twice made me think more about Satyrs and just how absurdly lazy they actually are. We all know that it becomes way easier to reach the same level with different cultivation type of you already have training in another one. So imagine a halfway smart Satyr getting for example Wizzard level grove, bam he is already stronger than 80 to 90 percent of normal cultivators and he did not have to spend centuries of struggle and fighting to reach it. And now he has a platform to reach the same level in every other cultivation type of his choice because your grove will overshadow any talent deficit that he might have. Probably second easiest would be to go to orcs and get at least gold level cultivation art if not diamond (first couple levels of cultivation were child's play). And if you don't like that you can go to Korra's world and buy an elemental and at least double your strength or even become sorcerer equivalent that way. Honestly if Theo started in their world he would be already ruling half the universe.


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