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Amazon Apocalypse 2: Chapter 15

🕑 Added 2023-09-09 15:00:04 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

I touched on it briefly back when he first learned about Cyra's previous boyfriend. That was where he figured he shouldn't lay everything on the table and get too cozy with the Samhains. Next draft I'll go back and be a lot more direct by having him just come out and say it.

KillBill

A plan? He never mentioned having a plan . When nobody really cared for them he seemed fine if they knew but now all of a sudden it has to be a mystery? Seems sketchy . He seems way over paranoid

George

So I think some of the rub on him not telling Myrina is that we found out he had a plan way later than we would have liked. If he had opened up with wanting to play his cards close to his chest, especially the mana bomb, earlier in the book, then I think it would have made more sense. As it is, he just seems to act like a buffoon who isn't telling Myrina things for no apparent reason (in the early chapters, it now makes sense), which doesn't make sense given what we know of his thoughts now.


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