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Amazon Apocalyse 2: Chapter 81

🕑 Added 2023-12-20 16:00:05 +0000 UTC

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AZ

A cockroach isn't smart, it's just annoying.

jmundt33a

I will note that this is the very first time we’ve seen a solid villain in this series. Both smart and dangerous. Why not enjoy this?

jmundt33a

Basically you want something like the beta version.

Lachezar

Not really a fan of the last few chapters. Everything just feels off. First Carter looked like a moron, then another Villain gets away by the most unlikely of coincidences and now that same villain is outmaneuvering him at every step. Honestly I would suggest cutting all the chapters after they busted the prison. Get rid of Lizzete once the prison is conquered and go back to the amazon world. I do realize that my negative opinion might be because I read chapters instead of the whole book and that the final version of the book might be very different. Thought I would mention it.


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