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Amazon Apocalypse 2: Chapter 82

🕑 Added 2023-12-22 16:00:06 +0000 UTC

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jmundt33a

Yup. That’s clearer. I think it should be Frank with his level was the star of the show. Otherwise you have plural shifting to singular.

Marvin

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Lachezar

I like that chapter :)

jmundt33a

Also, much better. This is a good battle and we see moves and countermoves. Nice. And Carter is now 60 and 60. Which according to last count puts him 13 below Myrina and probably 35 below big sis?

jmundt33a

should be "organizing them" not themselves. Or "letting them organize themselves" I think it should be the second. Self-organization in the panic would take too long, one of the trio has to issue orders. Window, not door. Rick just threw Chuck through the window and followed him out, didn't he? The door is still barred by concrete. Or did Rick notice that Carter must not be at the door anymore? should be gritted They are tailing him, but shouldn't it be immediate trail??? Hmm.


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