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Amazon Apocalypse 4: Chapter 49

🕑 Added 2024-10-26 15:00:09 +0000 UTC

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jmundt33a

Does seem like he’s led us to it with the results of the last battle, doesn’t it?

Vorsayo

Huh, I can see it now that you shone a light on this. It seems even more likely after chapter 50 and the theory Carter has about wanting his child to rule through or at minimum claiming she is having is child to the same end goal.

Vorsayo

He puts out a chapter every day M-F and has an artist on staff for custom character art and NSFW versions of the art as well. I think he said Yani or something like that is who does his art.

jmundt33a

At first I thought of her and Eowyn as paired world beacons equally drawn to Carter. Both possible candidates. But this last chapter and a half, she’s seemed more focused on bedding Carter than liberating the world. Including resorting to trickery. That seems…odd for a priestess, and doubly odd for someone in her position regardless of title. And so, I’m suddenly getting Siren/Courtesan vibes.

jmundt33a

I think either THIS is that quest or his involvement with his brother-in-law’s war will encompass it. And it might not be a record if Cyra’s advancing just as fast.

jmundt33a

I like both series. Haven’t taken the Patreon plunge with that author.

Vorsayo

Oh, please tell me tomorrow will be a bonus chapter day. I’m so into this story. I’m also reading Ard’s Oath 5 on patreon and I’m way more invested in this story.

Vorsayo

What makes you think that?

Jim Payne

Lolol

jmundt33a

See y’all tomorrow.

Sye Olmstead

Honestly I was surprised, I just thought he was gay lol figured he’d get rejected and we’d move on. But this is way better! Nice job, hope she joins in more of the story. Would also like to see Carter start trying to push past the systems limitations. Maybe he could become a cultivator that ascends into some kind of Demi god eventually

DanteFromTheInferno

So the idiot died off screen? What a shame, wanted to see what kind of character you made them out to be. Thanks for the chappy.

James Wafer

Calling her Eowyn alongside the hints was an instant giveaway to anyone familiar with Lord of the Rings

Brian McDonald

I mean if you meant to hide it blatantly saying he looked like he might be a girl I hiding is probably not the way to go lol

Detectivetrap23

I do hope Eowyn sticks around! Looking back there was foreshadowing of the princess twist a chapter earlier than I noticed. From chapter 46: “[Eowyn] was surprisingly weak, and between that and his delicate features, I suspected he might not really be a prince at all. But that wasn't my secret to pry at.” Personally I think you did a good job with the set up. Obvious signs once you know, guessable before revealed but not so blatant that readers won’t be surprised.

George Clark

lol I thought he was a he and was swinging towards a heartbreak with Carter 😂😂

Darius Sanguna

Carter called it himself, of course we'd spot it lol

ArbabSB

At this rate Carter is going to set a new speedrun record for reaching B-Grade. Will the System give him a shiny reward for it? Or a quest like he got at the C-Grade threshold with something shiny at the end?

Ens Ui

Damnit! I wished for more chapters but I need the interaction between carter and eowyn. You better include eowyn in the harem soon! I want her! She fits right in with the group.

Robert jacobs

Wonderful chapter! More please🥹

ArbabSB

Lmao I must confess that I am something of a fan of Demon General Marvin's writing, whatever Carter thinks of him. Le gasp! The prince was a princess all along??!!! Well aside from the name being a dead giveaway, you did drop some pretty big hints. Seems the Chaos Gods are looking into the power of cultivation? The Goddess in Jade also seems to cultivate the power of faith and in turn give blessings that can be quantified by the system. Are the Chaos Gods attempting to grow beyond A-Grade?

Marvin

Eh, better to have people realize it early than have them think I’m setting Carter up for some yaoi time.

jmundt33a

Also, if you wanted to hide the princess better, naming her after a princess character with 70 years of history who pulled almost the same move was a BAD idea.😀

jmundt33a

I’m worried about Calista as the Chaos God agent now. Wrong word. Should be pored, not poured.


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