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Amazon Apocalypse 4: Chapter 50

🕑 Added 2024-10-28 15:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Vorsayo

I like it. I’m all for slice of life but sometimes the pacing gets too slow.

Marvin

Yeah, I've been experimenting a little with a faster pacing lately. This story is going to be way too big to tell without covering ground at a decent speed.

Brian T

He should bring Eowyn home with him.

Vorsayo

Dang, is it just me or is there more stuff happening in this book. Seems like a whirlwind of story advancement.

Marvin

Book 2 was just shy of 250k words. This one is a little over 150k right now.

Vorsayo

What was the word count on book 2 and what is the word count so far for book 4?

Marvin

Probably not. Book 2 was really long.

Vorsayo

Is this going to end up being the longest book in the series so far?

jmundt33a

He’s partied with this force. The share is already spread. Ironically, he may have been empowering his own final opponent on this quest.

Ens Ui

I wonder if the other half of the exp were being transported to his ladies. Can the system do that? or there's a limit within the area of it?

jmundt33a

Her behavior last chapter had concerning undercurrents.

jmundt33a

The Demon King is the dunce noble. Odds are, he’s the idiot.

jmundt33a

Not lifted. Boon to followers, half share for him.

NovaZero

Or she's the idiot. And instead of calling out to a god, she wound up attracting a chaos god. That's about as idiotic as Carter's first foray into dealing with the Wolves only for them to turn into Chaos wolves. So in my head, maybe she's the idiot and already plotting to make up for it by expecting Carter's noble hero-ness to be okay with it all (double-down idiocy, expecting simphood to reign them all in).

NovaZero

Line might be missing a word: Now his skinless (form? Body? Figure?) filled most of the throne he sat on.

Ens Ui

He should be close to being a b-grade with all of his exp. The curse was also lifted.

Marvin

Yeah, we will have a chapter dedicated to stats at the end of this.

NovaZero

"armor armor" Extra armour! 💪 Amorous Armour! Extra Amorous Armour!

Sin

True enough, either the fool or the agent. It’d make sense that she was the agent.

jmundt33a

Should be me accordingly. Not my.

ArbabSB

I could see Callista as either the Chaos Gods' agent or the idiot (with the demon king as the agent in the latter case). Depends on whether whatever plan she has fails in a hilarious/embarrassing way against Carter.

jmundt33a

Maybe she has a beefed up version of Lisette’s camouflage skill. She seems like the only suspect left (and she was the one to react strongly to Sharky). Maybe her strategy changed? She spent the latter half of this campaign trying to get him alone. Was she trying to kill him or seduce/claim him for Chaos?

ArbabSB

Did Carter get any levels for killing the lich at least? The guy was B-Grade, if just barely.

jmundt33a

The quest says Lich, dragon, agent of Chaos, and an idiot. Demon King is not on the list. Based on what the Demon King said before the attack, he’s the idiot. So, we’re looking for the agent of Chaos. Feels like the warning arrow is pointing at Calista.

ArbabSB

Thanks for giving us the full long chapter in one go. Uh, okay. Lich and dragon definitely dealt with. The idiot I assume was the demon king. Though the demon king would fit "agent of the Chaos Gods" as well. I think jmundt33a's theory that Callista is the Chaos Gods' agent is most likely now. She seems eager for Carter to leave and I can't think of anyone else it could be. Did the Chaos Gods give her an ability to fool Carter's examine? She was only D-Grade when he checked.

jmundt33a

Looks like he got the Lich, the Dragon, and the idiot. Is Calista the Agent? I suppose it would be even funnier if the idiot were the one left. Looks like he has a blindspot for beautiful opponents. Or he hasn’t examined his army thoroughly. If it is Calista, it also means leveling FP is a no-go.

Ens Ui

Whose the idiot!!!! The Lich, the dragon, demon king and the idiot Lol, damn Callista is a crafty errrr yah she's crafty, hope her plan fails


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