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Amazon Apocalypse 4 [Deleted Chapter]: Chapter 71

🕑 Added 2024-12-02 16:00:17 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

There will definitely be opportunities to teach that lesson coming up in the next book!

Caffinated1

I loved it, but was somehow sad that the finals didn't come down to Cyra vs Myrina showing the difference in their gear as the determining factor, proving that whoever Carter backs wins and that Cyra should never have doubted the power of good logistics.

Marvin

Thanks for reading!

NA

So .... usually I wait until a book is finished, but broke down and binged all seventy chapters over the weekend. Magnificent work as usual. Curious to see what Carter's big plan is, aside from showing off. And if there are other plans afoot we're not aware of! And in the longer-term whether he learns to communicate with others instead of doing his own thing, and how far he takes the "I'm hurting you for your own good" rationalization we see at the end of this chapter. Not the direction I expected Carter's character or this story arc to take. Also armored wizards are awesome and there should be more of them. Anyways, thanks for a great read, and looking forward to Wednesday!

Wrathwind

I hope next book we see Carter with power armor that he can use is skills in a wizard in power armor shores up a lot of classic ‘wizard’ weaknesses

Mistweaver

Great chapter! Have to disagree with some of the comments about Carter. He’s an Aethersmith, not a melee specialist. So, without magic, he was fighting at a handicap in the tournament. So it seems perfectly acceptable for him to use specially crafted items to bolster his weaknesses.

jmundt33a

Too true.

jmundt33a

There was a straight up duel part. She was better, but he made her work. And he demonstrated the shortcomings of Goldennose (or whatever his name was). He didn’t buy it, he wasn’t supplied it, he made that armor and those trick items. Which he then employed strategically after lifting her bag of holding. He didn’t just mass activate an entire bag of talismans like her other supposed intended. He gave Cyra a chance to show how impressive she is, and still won.

Vorsayo

So good!!! The reveal of who room blade was to Cyra was the perfect cherry on top of an already awesome chapter.

NovaZero

Forget his ploy and see it from an outside perspective - she was defeated with wealth not martial prowess. No matter how valid or accepted it is technically, the heck does that say about him? He's not a dark horse, he's a whale. Her gear was stripped, she was bound and... the heck kind of reputation is Cyra, a matriarch of an alleged proud martial clan supposed to have? This arc needs a catharsis and short of a brazen and public assassination attempt, I'm not seeing it. This is blue balls.

Marvin

Unfortunately I wasn’t able to get ahead this book. I’m still working on the last chapter and the epilogue, so I don’t have a full ebook to release this time around. Sorry! I will think of something for higher tier people though. Maybe a few polls to come up with side characters in book 5.

jmundt33a

Why? Why was this an insult? He had tricks for her, but do we remember he can’t use any spells right now? I think that’s the next improvement to his personal armor so he can combine spell strategies and attacks with blade work and armament.

NovaZero

That's the part I'm raining an eye at because this fight - all told, was insulting.

ArbabSB

I just hope Carter didn't burn his goodwill with Cyra, Kyrina, and the Samhain Clan with this stunt. I believe in Myrina. But I admit you've made me worried by bringing up Spopovich.

ArbabSB

Damn, that was quite a duel. I am very proud of Cyra for doing as well she did against an aethersmith coming up with counters for her specifically. I wonder if Cyra is going to pissed at Carter here. Romantic wedding duel aside, Cyra did promise to win the tournament and gain command of the magical auxiliaries to help her brother. And Carter destroyed that. Mostly I think she'll be mad at herself for losing, but she might be mad at Carter too. I'm interested to see how things develop from here. Now we just have to hope Myrina wins against this Phantomfist person.

Justin Webb

Are you going to release the whole book at a higher tier

jmundt33a

One other bad thought. How nuts would a duel between Doomblade and Feisty Redhead have to be. We do NOT want Myrina commanding a magical auxiliary.

jmundt33a

Should be hope, not hoped.

jmundt33a

I don’t think Kyrina will accept that as a marriage duel. Carter will have to improve his blasdework. But yes, it was satisfying. Myrina better dust off this Phantomfist twit. I’m feeling rumbles of Spopovich and Uub from DBZ here.

Josh Miller

only problem with this chapter is having to wait till Wednesday for the next one


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