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Amazon Apocalypse 4 [Deleted Chapter]: Chapter 72

🕑 Added 2024-12-04 16:00:10 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

I settled on combining two of the ones I felt alright with together. Both drive the story forward in similar ways. One is Reluna, the other is a new character. You’ll see on Saturday.

jmundt33a

Have you made a decision on the epilogue? There are a bunch of options. Back at Crownhill there are Reina, the widowed lawyer (the real one), Kerrie, and Bertha. Among the Samhain, there’s Kyrina or the cousins. There’s even that Oni royal adventurer from Carter’s quests.

Marvin

Patreon exclusive short story, then Amazon Apocalypse 5.

Alex Wierzbicki

What series is next?

jmundt33a

Whatever the case is fine. You don’t need was. But it does work, it’s just a touch awkward. Should be exhausted my entire supply (or arsenal, or selection) of anti-Amazonian weapons. There’s a word missing. Should be easily or handily, not readily. Easily exploitable would be cleaner Should be half bad. No hyphen. Probably remove all. “you were Miss Stoic with the weight…” You have already twice in one sentence.

Austin Wolf

Probably will get a look in the epilouge

Marvin

Hopefully this month. I’ve been editing as I go, so as long as I decide no big rewrites are needed it should be good to go (after some minor edits and proofing).

Marvin

Whoops. That’s an important one to fix.

Adam

“Her cock” should by “my cock”

Mistweaver

When is AA4 going to be released?

jarret woods

and remember the spirit is willing but the flesh is soft and spongy

jarret woods

I like the futurerame reference in there

WhiteRabbit

Good to see Cyra finally being brought in

jmundt33a

Guess next book’s war will be his B-Grade quest tree.

jmundt33a

True. Myrina’s too competitive to forfeit, right? Is it time to activate that modification of her armor?

ArbabSB

Great-grandmother IIRC.

ArbabSB

Cyra took her defeat a whole lot better than I expected. And no nasty surprise defeat for Myrina. Whew! What a relief. And the first time was both funny and sweet. Didn't feel like a rehash of the previous sex scene with the mighty Scepter. One chapter? I wonder if the Samhain clan will send a rescue team for Cyra led by Matriarch Kyrina? Or if we'll have to wait for Book 5 to get the family's reaction. I wonder what brother-in-law X 2 Herius thinks of events? Doomblade vs Feisty Redhead, let's go. The 48 hour wait for a new chapter always stings.

Sin

Well finally got her, thankfully it was in front of a crowd & he had her grandmother’s approval months or more in advance.


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