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Amazon Apocalypse 4 Rewrites: Chapter 74

🕑 Added 2024-12-17 18:40:23 +0000 UTC

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Marvin

Might be cool, though nothing came to mind for me. If it does before publication, maybe I'll add it.

Brian T

Does Carter get a title for winning the tournament?

NovaZero

She's one of those lewd hand holders. What a slut! Lol

jmundt33a

That’s what Grade entry quests are for.

ArbabSB

K-kissing before the wedding duel? How scandalous! Cyra would never!

jmundt33a

Cyra never even kissed the twit from the Book 1 epilogue? Damn!

ArbabSB

Great chapter. Cyra and Carter sealing the deal was perfect. And level 197 race and class, nice. Given the caliber of opposition Carter is facing, he'll need to get deep into B-Grade soon.

jmundt33a

I think the sisters and Sakura need to develop a stratified groupie policy. Just shoving or clubbing all the women around Carter won’t work In addition to tournament celebrity, he’s a walking Hysteria trigger now.

jmundt33a

Should be Using Lightsculptor’s Brush. You forgot to capitalize brush. Remember Luthrin is Cyra and Myrina’s Great-Gran, not their grandmother. Galbatorix is her son-in-law. Should be and it seemed Perhaps it should be but slowing almost to a stop I think change fiancé to husband. There’s no uncertainty on that score in this version. Should be restrain her hands

Marvin

Patreon changed their early access drop-down menu to look exactly the same as their scheduling drop-down menu, in case you're wondering why I've accidentally posted chapters I'm trying to schedule like 3 times now.


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