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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 9

🕑 Added 2025-01-18 16:00:07 +0000 UTC

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horus scope

I feel like his mystic realm needs a golem core. Also he should still use the manual control kind, they were still useful even if not in combat. it’s just a cool aspect

NovaZero

Lol. Ionian Hetairoi Carter version

Vorsayo

My thoughts exactly. So is there any reason he couldn’t keep his legion in his Mystic Realm (is it going to get a name?) while traveling to make it faster to move his legion to the correct battlefield? I know this kind of this was addressed in The Wheel of Time once Traveling was rediscovered. They had to keep their forces in camp near the battlefield because while they were trying to get the refugees out of an area earlier in the story they calculated with the largest gateway they could make it would take a week for the magic users to get everyone through, assuming the 3 of them could hold gateways open for around 5 hours per every 10 hours due to exhaustion that it would have taken a week to get everyone evacuated. So how large can Carter make the gateways to his Mystic Realm?

Marvin

Yeah, there will be a mess hall in the mystic realm. I'm hoping Carter gets to make the other legions jealous.

NovaZero

No thanks. If we must suffer a new young master, make it a menacing one and not whiny one pls

jmundt33a

He has a different magical nepotism case to deal with now

Gennydoll Weber

No please don't lol

Gennydoll Weber

My favorite type of scene irl who has time for more than quickies during the holidays and post recovery

jmundt33a

Aah. Was finishing the audiobook and didn’t remember. Carter definitely has new villains to worry about. Do not bring Dram back. Of the gone villains, I only find Lisette intriguing for a return. Morgathor might have narrative possibilities, but Luthrin ending him while he’s trying to negotiate with a far more powerful person he had delusions about rivaling? That’s absolutely hilarious. I’m fine just imagining him seething with envy in that afterlife arcade.

Vorsayo

So did you already have the idea for the prefabricated defensives or did you take my suggestion from the other day and run with it? just curious. I had another suggestion while reading this chapter. I’ve heard the saying, “an army marches on its stomach” so many times in fantasy books. You already partially addressed this idea with the mess hall plan. But if you are going to bring Bridget and some staff from the bakery to make healing biscuits and it sounds like cooks in general I think it would be a no brainer to build Bridget a fully equipped industrial bakery and kitchen in the Mystic Realm. This would keep the cooking staff safe, eliminate potentially vulnerable supply line issues, and raise and/or keep moral high by being able to give the auxiliaries hot tasty meals that can potentially give buffs and baked goods that can heal.

ArbabSB

@Marvin: Nooo please. As you've said, Dramonar's been dealt with, multiple times. He's had his time as a villain. We don't need him showing up again as Carter's cockroach nemesis. @jmundt33a: Dramonar's curse was dealt with last book. Remember his soul, along with others, was possessing the torchdragon.

Marvin

I think he's down for good, isn't he? There isn't much left of his soul at this point. Unless you guys want me to reincarnate him and bring him back for a round 4?

jmundt33a

Is the Dramonar curse showing up in this volume?

Mistweaver

Thanks for continuing to improve Gobgob! Also, “catching up” with the girls doesn’t have to be some long section- just mention it happened during the evening or something. I’m glad he’s back reviewing the troops and eager to learn what has been happening in Crownhill

jmundt33a

We do need to know how he’s going to finish the upgrade process from recruits to elites so we can track his quest.

jmundt33a

Remove I’d like to know. Should just be I’d like to place. Should be booths, not boots. Maybe should be covered it with her own hand A unit is more than one person. Maybe specialists? Should be yelp or moan. Not help. Should be the prince’s

jmundt33a

Probably levels, weapons, armor, and proficiencies.

Detectivetrap23

I have such a huge soft spot for gobgob and I’m not entirely sure why haha It’s nice to see her developing and becoming more confident! She’s come such a long way from book 1 and it feels very natural. Keep up the good work!

Marvin

Yes, good catch.

Matt

Thanks for the chapter! And I agree thoes hard working women deserve some attention whenever they can get it haha

Marcell Palmer

Appreciate it. Love where it's going and glad Gogob's coming into her own

ArbabSB

Then there's Carter's B-Grade threshold quest. I wonder what the requirements are for the magical auxilliary troops to be considered elites as per the quest instructions? Do they need additional levels? Or something else?

ArbabSB

Well Sakura sure appreciated that. A month without Carter would be rough. Hope Myrina gets a reward too for her hard work on the troops. "I gave Sakura’s horn a gentle little stroke"- Sakura has two horns on either side of her head since her C-Grade racial evolution right? Much less unwieldy than the previous single horn on her forehead. Great idea to bring along the new mystic realm as a secure base for the troops. Hope we meet Herius soon and he and Carter can hash out a plan of campaign. Carter needs intelligence on the opposition as well.


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