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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 11

🕑 Added 2025-01-22 16:00:13 +0000 UTC

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NovaZero

Why integrate with system when you can make system integrate with you?

NovaZero

In short the warp is a neutral plane of thought. But then chaotic elements taint the water and kind of foul it up. Oh fuck it, it's the internet. It's all data, but idiots flood it with furries.

Bharath

I do get confused with all the inter-dimensional talk though. Had me thinking of watching Interstellar for the first time - esp with all the time dilation stuff

jmundt33a

He has one quest he seems to be delaying. He needs those elite units.

jmundt33a

Should be advance force (like advance party). Not advanced. That was as much help as we’d be able to count on from them, though. Should be when we were done No comma after command. Should be peak of C-Grade

jmundt33a

Demonstrate without shortcuts or cheat codes. Carter basically gave the System the finger on that one.

NovaZero

System is tired. Do it yourself.

NovaZero

Or gave it to him as a quest to cockblock him from ever using it as a name or title in any form

Adam M.

Great chapter. Shame about your Steam deck. Keep warm!

Bharath

manually constructing trans-dimensional System infrastructure based on the provided blueprints. Didn't understand a word of what that meant!

Vorsayo

Don’t know ANYTHING about Warhammer lol.

Marvin

Yeah. It is a mix between the aether in a lot of series and maybe the warp from Warhammer. A metaphysical dimension of those guts and dreams that underpins magic.

Vorsayo

Can you explain the Kindling more. It seemed in this chapter that Cater was pulling physical materials out of The Kindling? If he gets proficient enough with this would he be able to start just pulling the raw materials he needs for crafting out of The Kindling?

Vorsayo

So yeah… the system is 100% trying to get out from under the thumb of that Vayly bitch. From how you described the room where she interacted with the system it also seems system infrastructure is breaking down. So I think the system is also pointing him towards being able to repair broken and/or missing components. Doesn’t seem like it’s running at full capacity. Also it is definitely restricted at the moment as it should be able to issue a quest to kill Vayly or anyone else trying to abuse its powers.

Vorsayo

So does entering Sanctum from Mucaria mean that Sanctum’s time flows at the same time dilated speed as Mucaria?

Marvin

Thank you for reading!

Marvin

Thanks for reading!

Mistweaver

Love the chapter and the series!

Gennydoll Weber

Loving the story so far!

Adam

It’d be funny if the system gave Carter the title “Supreme Aethersmith of Wondrous Creations” for completing that quest.

Marvin

He hasn't leveled it up high enough to have access to that feature yet.

Marvin

Just over 200. Probably like 203 or something.

Marvin

Vayly could use her own quest system to make the Samhain ancestors report to her, probably by assigning large penalties for quest failure. They're trying to slip in and out without her noticing so that can't happen. As for the crusade, that's basically just how Carter's translation ability is converting what, in Prince Herius' language, means 'a war on behalf of the System and the Arcadia Multiverse.' If Carter was from the middle east, his translation ability would have called it a jihad.

Marvin

Yes, thanks

Marcell Palmer

Loved this chapter. Sorry about your steam deck. I've been looking for a used one but everyone is over charging for them. It was 38° here yesterday. The only thing I noticed is off hand was that you used persona when I think you meant personal. I want to try helping as much as I can with typos if it helps with your process.

Jon Erwin

So I don’t normally do corrections but you have peak of B grade and it should be peak of C grade

Detectivetrap23

After the end of the book 4 and the revelation that the system and the people currently running it don’t necessarily get along, I pay a bit more attention to things like this and the idea of the systems favor. I feel like the system wants to get free from the people currently controlling it, and it’s building up Carter to do that. Learning to build all these important, lost system infrastructure would surely help with that. The

WhiteRabbit

Not sure if adding the system to his pocket dimension is going to turn out good or bad.

Corac

I think he might be able to control it somewhat but hasn't?

ArbabSB

I'm still a bit unclear on the relationship between Glacia and the Samhain Clan and this "local noble house" of Ladwick, which I assume is the Architect lady's house. You've stated that Glacia is independant of the Architect and Prince Herius is liberating Ladwick (placing it back under the Architect's control?) as a crusade as the world has religious significance? But the Samhain Ancestors would fall under the command of the Architect if they help Herius' forces too much? I'm don't understand how that works.

James coe

I was going for the transhuman more than robot part and could only think of admech while listening to a 40k podcast.....but still think a tech marine style outfit would fit

ArbabSB

I think Carter's ascended beyond relatively crude robotic limbs/prosthetics, at least for himself.

ArbabSB

Love it. I like how you described the crafting process. This is definitely the start of something big. It appears the System is prepping Carter to free the node controlled by the Architect lady (don't remember her name). Maybe said node will escape to this Sanctum using this infrastructure or set up shop here once Carter frees it (her?). What is Carter's Aethersmith level now?

Swordcollector45

Nicely done

James coe

Sounds like someone needs to be decked with steam

James coe

Welp when in doubt just build your own engineer - system POV. Add in the bloodline stuff and oh look a new race of system engineers.......also biomagical upgrades just remind me of admech/iron hands. Maybe some weapon ideas for future - weapon/tool combo like cog axes

Swordcollector45

Damn sucks about your steam deck.

Adam

Glad to see Carter focusing a bit on crafting, even if it was just for a chapter. However, it’s still unclear what the time dilation ratio is in the Sanctum.


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