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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 13

🕑 Added 2025-01-25 16:00:12 +0000 UTC

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Kangaroo

Unless it confers an advantage, is useful for world building or you can use it as fore shadowing for a future character the list might be unnecessary.

Adam

Marvin, unless the speed runner list impacts the plot (gives a reward or another character refers to it), feel free to cut it.

Bryce Dirks

I think the speed runner list would be cool because even if he isn't on the top it is fine. It would still show all his hard work because it isn't like he had backing by a rich and powerful faction that gave him everything to advance. I also like the the earth's integration list or maybe a speed running list of fo the people that came were from new integrations. That would make a list expand over a lot more worlds and have more impact maybe.

jmundt33a

And the Order Gods are…ironically…supposed to be neglectful jerks. Being a Chaos God might make him like the Architect he just dreamwalked.

jmundt33a

I’d be curious about the speedrunners’ list. Finding out about someone not an Architect or a direct descendant as something for Carter to notice and be impressed by so he doesn’t get bored.

Marvin

I get the impression readers only want to see a best-of list if the MC is at the top. I think I'm going to ditch the speedrunners list and maybe have a strongest of Earth list, that way Carter can be at the top.

Chris

I want to see most of the titles and awards unless it does not concern the story. maybe put a poll out?

Wrathwind

Ah fair enough, best of lists are a staple of system stories but idk if it fits with the lore we just got about the system why would they add this to the system?

Chris

ROFLMAO

Marvin

Do people actually want to see that? From comments I was thinking reception was mixed on the idea, so I was thinking of cutting it from the book.

Wrathwind

Will the speed runners list thing pop up again Carters gota have a system notification about that now that he’s B rank right?

Marcell Palmer

Kill three opposing chaos gods before A grade for super special mega gift pack sent with a kiss from your favorite system.

Gary Becker

I dont think hes opposed to it. I mean power is power it only matters how you use it and the chaos gods seem a little less restrained than the others and so far hes only had contact with like 4 chaos gods so i think you might be jumping the gun a bit

Fireinmyeier Prime

Best way would probably be to have it be its own chapter, so audio listeners can just skip it without losing out on the story

Brian McDonald

My point really was that all the chaos gods we’ve encountered have been terrible that kinda pointed to there being a certain type of person who seeks or qualifies for that power and suddenly here’s the system offering the same power to someone who appears diametrically opposed to that mind set

jmundt33a

Glad there are plans for at least that many volumes.

jmundt33a

Also Reluna: “It’s a Chaos Dragon God! Kill it! Kill it NOW!!!”

Mistweaver

My bet is that he destroys and replaces the other chaos gods. Myrina and Sakura, maybe? 😉 And we already know they aren’t really gods, just very powerful creatures

jmundt33a

This doesn’t feel like Heracles joining Olympus. This feels like God of War.

Sorahn

I’m sympathetic to that issue, but I’d think big events, like going up a grade, could be a good reason to make an exception. Assuming things shot up again given the points per level at B-Grade also spiked.

Brian McDonald

Really? He’s done nothing but fight the chaos gods since book one and suddenly he has no issues joining their ranks? Idk about this it seems a little out of character I feel like the system should have given him options like chaos can’t be the only faction of gods out there

Vorsayo

Great chapter! I can’t wait to see Carter’s new abilities in action. Not just his increase in power from reaching B Grade, but seeing how his B Grade job quest reward benefits him even outside of crafting. The new signature skill sounds awesome. I like what you are doing. The skill list was getting a bit ridiculous and hard to keep track of.

zombies wolking

Can’t wait

Marvin

This will happen probably in book 6 or 7. Whenever he reaches A-Grade.

Gennydoll Weber

Oh, the chaos! Love it! He's gonna be the supreme chaos god! I'm excited to get to the damage dealing!

ArbabSB

Doubt Marvin wants to be sued by Games Workshop. Carter has the "creates advanced technology" aspect of the Void Dragon at least.

Dutch Palmer

I'll fix it in edits

Adam M.

Awesome chapter! My personal guess was Void Dragon…looks like I wasn’t far off. Interesting to see that it was aligned with chaos gods.

WhiteRabbit

Somehow I don't think the chaos gods are going to appreciate this new development

Marvin

We've had a full stat sheet at the end of every book. I stopped including them in text because audio readers didn't like them.

zombies wolking

I’m half expecting that there will be an aura radiating from his followers now that will let her know which will cause her to speed up the golem destruction to rush to him

zombies wolking

Agreed we need a full stat sheet soon I don’t even remember the last time we saw it though I think book 2

Marvin

You are correct, that should have said Ladwick.

ArbabSB

A Chaos God that opposes other Chaos Gods. Is Carter becoming Malal? Or maybe the Dark King (hypothetical Chaos God GEOM from the Horus Heresy series)?

ArbabSB

This was awesome. Congratulations to Carter on rising to B-Grade! And that signature skill is amazing. Mana absorption and energy attacks in one would be great on its own, but he has flight and passives to increase both his physical and magical stats. A very versatile and useful skill. Only potential downside is maybe losing commanding aura for a terror aura. Also confirmation that great-grandma Luthrin is A-Grade, not B-Grade like I previously thought.

James coe

Establishing a new power level before the campaign is fine it's the smartest way to go to war, prepare the fire and the forges then cry havoc and let slip the salamanders of war, dogs I mean dogs.......I know this isn't the quote but it fits

ArbabSB

Reluna: "My very own nascent Chaos God that I can study at will! Awesome!"

ArbabSB

Pretty sure the signature skill will cover at least mana siphon as mana absoption is part of the skill.

Dutch Palmer

*First, I assigned my Sage of Forbidden Knowledge class stat points. Those would be the same as usual* ... That is just TOO vague. What is the usual? It's been a long time since we've actually seen Carter allocate his free stat points that we don't know what the 'usual' is.

George

Chaos dragon is sick af. I am curious to see the reception of that from his allies though, especially Reluna.

Matt

Good to see some of the skills being combined and enhanced! Thanks for the chapter !

zombies wolking

Anyone else curious about what the signature skill he will become when he uses fabulous falace

FarFromLogic

what a cliffhanger, yeah, lets achieve godhood, get a signature skill that is chaos god aligned and put his pending divinity asside for later

Marcell Palmer

Love when it's time to upgrade. The only thing I noticed is the end of the first paragraph you say, "What fanfare there was would at least prove that he’d made good on his promise to lead an army to war to retake Glacia." I think it's supposed to be Ladwick. Anyways awesome chapter.

jmundt33a

He’ll miss the aura and siphon skills. Maybe not as much for Inner Beast So..he’s shooting to be a beneficent Chaos God? Interesting.

Sorahn

Pretty big development here. Seems like he has three pools of power here, for lack of a better way to describe it. His Eldritch spells, his power armor/tech stuff, and now this Chaos Dragon piece. Gonna be exciting to see how they work together or interact with each other.

Chris

This was......... AWESOME!!!! Carter's turning into a bigger badass every time I turn around. What better to clean out the chaos pantheon than a chaos god? Kill them from the inside. After this campaign, Carter should receive a quest to do just that for his A grade.

Adam

I agree that Carter’s class could use an upgrade.

SiI3nt

I wonder if this will be family/kingdom/world building book or all that + another scepter wielder will be added 😏

Cdonovan

Very interesting. Never imagined Carter taking steps to become one of the chaos gods. Figured he would end up in a third path instead if chaos or order.

jmundt33a

Retake Glacia? Ladwick? Should be hostile locals Casting is okay, but shooting dirty looks might be better


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