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Amazon Apocalypse 5: Chapter 16

🕑 Added 2025-01-31 16:00:09 +0000 UTC

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jmundt33a

If he survives that long, would Carter have a similar lecture series as part of a more thorough strategy!

Marvin

Missed this, but Theo from Spellheart had to build an academy for his thousands of kids. And yes, he gave auditorium lectures.

Marvin

I will probably have to see which one I used more and then control+F fix them during editing.

jmundt33a

Lady Velicia is spelled Velica when introduced in bold. This causes confusion going forward.

jmundt33a

Lisette. Our most dangerous and effective villain to date.

jmundt33a

Maybe his initial fears are allayed, but there seems to be suspicion percolating. I have to say, for a guy who didn’t want to get involved, Carter is doing something bold heavy lifting with the army.

jmundt33a

Possibly, but they’re not all doing interesting stuff or in a position to need such instruction. Herius might be one of 5 or less to be young enough or naive enough to need instruction while also doing something bold. Court schemers are a dime a dozen in Glacia. A prince who wants to be a true conqueror?? I can see Ted taking Herius aside for a quick word and then being alarmed at either his inexperience or his discomfort with the topic.

Adam

Herius is going to be Nintendo will all the enhanced stability updates he’s doing.

ArbabSB

Ted probably has too many kids to give them personalized instruction. Him teaching his kids would probably involve him standing in front of a full auditorium like a professor with a slideshow on a projector screen.

NovaZero

People doubt the Prince. Funny if the prince has a royal quest to restore government stability? And what better method of stabilising the rule of the sole surviving heir... Then by providing her an heir of her own?

Daymontray Brown

It is pretty confusing that it’s written like Carter has no caution toward her because he scanned her. You would think Carter’d caution the prince about getting involved at all. Everything about her is irregular and I don’t see Cater writing that off, unless he is being manipulated or something.

James coe

This is more directed to carter than H who maybe more naive to this although you'd thought being a prince he would he protection from this but carter should be used to the trickzie beatchs by now to see through it

jmundt33a

Kinda surprised Ted hasn’t drilled his son about this particular danger. Figure it must be a pet peeve of his.

jmundt33a

To be fair to H, this might be the first time he’s seen this playbook. This is Carter’s 5th battle experience. Lisette, the vampires in Morgy’s crew, the high priestess on Eowyn’s planet, and the final dungeon boss just before he came on this campaign.

jmundt33a

Or deceased before you can claim a crown. Clearly Ted should not solo parent.

jmundt33a

Possibly B Grade but able to construct a full fake Examine ID? Maybe the next level of the stuff Lisette did earlier?

jmundt33a

Should be struck me as off. Does Lisette have imitators? Seemed in consecutive phrases. Former glory twice in one sentence.

ArbabSB

I doubt this Lady Velicia is who she says she is or really a D-Grade. Either she's a cultivator looking to infiltrate the enemy, or a spy of some kind, maybe for the "heretics" on Ladwick mentioned in that Architect lady's epilogue last book. Prince Herius is really showing his lack of real-world experience here, falling for such an obvious honey-trap. What I'm worried about is that she'll drive a wedge between Carter and Herius by contradicting Carter's advice and forcing the prince to choose sides.

Wrathwind

Haha him accidentally bringing the construction crew with him to war really gave me a good laugh this morning, good chapter.

James coe

So I am getting more manipulative vibes from the local noble followed by having to kick her ass to space to save the army/prince

Sorahn

Wonder if Carter is making a mistake taking Velicia’s information at face value. He should remember the woman from Crownhill with the Charm class, forget her name but it feels a lot like that situation.

WhiteRabbit

Lol that he forgot the construction crew he was toting around and brought them to an active warzone is pretty funny

Detectivetrap23

Immediately starting a relationship with the first pretty girl you see on a mission… that’s how you wind up with an unmanageably large harem prince Herius haha


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